selimpensfiction

Author of Doctor Who - Short Trips: Landbound

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Well done!

You succeeded in putting us in the head of this poor Alliance lab rat. We really feel his pain and anger and confusion, wondering what is it with Miranda. Well done. I thought this was very well written and am glad you put it out there.

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Really enjoyed this!

Everything about this is story so believable, from the way you've captured Wray's voice to his experience at the convention. Love the Battlestar Galactica jabs. Of course Wray would end up blowing it. The nice twist is that he comes away inspired. Good job!

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A dream without pants...

Love this Firefly vignette, with its humour and spot-on characterization. Of course Wash would fantasize about his wife in a fur bikini. And River's insinuation that he wasn't wearing pants had me falling over with laughter. A leaf on the wind indeed! Wash. Dinosaur slayer.

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A nice story!

What a charming slice of the life of Serenity's crew. Very well written with voices spot on, I found it charming and thoroughly enjoyable. Thanks for contributing this!

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Nice story!

I enjoyed reading this, very much in the spirit of the show. Love me love my dinosaurs. Thanks for posting this.

Okay, so I have to write at least two hundred characters. How about now?

No? Right. What about now?

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Dark but essential reading

A very dark story, isn't it, but very powerful, and of course it could have happened. Your characterizations are spot on as ever. Loved how Wash still remembers enough of his previous life to tell the Reaver to get out of his chair. Am glad I read this, thanks for submitting.

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Funny!

I was splitting myself by the time I got to the end. Very funny and well done.

Now, I have to write at least two hundred characters for a review on this site, so you can stop reading, I'm just going to ramble on for a bit until there's at least two hundred characters...

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