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Loved it
The emotion shown was very captivating and I enjoyed seeing the relationship. I want to see where this goes and if Lilee's parents are going to every be okay with their relationship.
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LIKE IT!
The story has really good start and the way you write is interesting, love the plot and story. Although there could be a bit of improvement in the writing skill. I honestly like your book.
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