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Great!

I'd say there's a few mistakes which can be edited. In the very first paragraph I saw one minor mistake but I really like the plot on where the story is headed. I would recommend it.

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I'm totally baffled! I love it, the story line and plot, the writing style, and those skills!!!!

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Very well written!

The story is very well written and structured. It tells me everything I need to know in the story and doesn't stall. Very nice and interesting story!

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Love it!

The story overall is very detailed, and quick. It doesn't stall nor slow down, giving the reader an active suspense on what's going to happen next. I have no idea where the plot is going because I never expected that twist in the very end. (I won't go into more detail, because I don't want to spoil it) I like the way the author makes new paragraphs after each dialogue. I find the story very easy to read that way. Writing takes very hard work, and by the author's grammar and punctuation you notice that they did put their best effort into it. I would recommend it! ^^

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^^

I have no words for how this book is amazing and everything I need in my life!! I love to see ARMYs books. It's so unique!

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