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Excellent

I loved it, every second was thrilling. I'm just sad I don't have more to read the time of this review. I found this by accident and feel like I am missing a bigger story or series, but with the way the author wrote this I wasn't lost for long, which is a good thing. I'd love to see more (only up to chapter 17 at this time) and I'd love to know if there is a series behind this, or if it's an original work. I know I've seen several of, and read a couple, other works involving a similar set up, but I don't remember enough of the others to know if they're related in any way. Either way, excellent story with only a few minor grammar errors and typos to throw me off. Mostly just words out of order, doubled, or missing than anything that suggests a lack of understanding English grammar.

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