Icecreamaddict12215
@servalq13
Hello there I'm new to writing, and the writing world in general. But I do have a story that I've been working on for a while, later on I will draw it.
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intriguing plot
I'm enjoying the story so far. I like the character Rhea a lot, she's quite the tough cookie wouldn't want to be anywhere near her if someone angered her. But we soon learn she cares about her dear sister, so she has a soft side. I also enjoyed the other characters as well. They all have intriguing dialogue that can grip anyone's attention. Its a must read for those who enjoy suspense and action.
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okay
I like where the story is going, but I think there should be dialogue at the beginning of the story as well. To show the main characters personality. I was also a bit confused on what was going on in the arena. But nevertheless it's an okay story.
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