shapeman

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Please Continue

I LOVE this story. I would love to see it continue sooooooooo much. So please, i beg for you to continue this story. It is truly great as of yet. I will read every update if you continue it. I am more excitedfor this than i was for the HP movies. WOOOOOOOO HYPE!!!!

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Pretty Good

Although the weird connections from paragraph got to me a bit, this story was very good over all. Keep up the good work! I will check to see if you have any more stories and if you do I am more than eager to read it/them! I will most likely suggest this to my friends who are interested in creepy stories like this one!

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