Shaun Gates

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Excellent fantasy short story. My only criticism would be that it could use a few more commas. Good work (Y). Okay, I'm terrible at this review thing but I did want to leave a positive comment but I'm under the minimum threshold. Though I am bit tired of this anti-elf propaganda, regardless of what Gimli said about them.

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