Shaurya Narula

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I just want to say, I have not finished the book yet but I think I have read enough to get a good understanding.
The plot is amazing and there is a sense of mystery in the chapters. The book is really good but sometimes I found myself reading some paragraphs again trying to figure out what happened so it would be great if you could make who was saying what clearer and what someone was referring to clearer too.

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The plot is incredibly good and interesting. It is really good for a first chapter. When you start working on the other chapters, try to make it as gripping as possible by adding secrets in character's backstories.

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