Shavon Erasmus

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It could be great

I know it is hard getting a bad review and I am terribly sorry to have to give one.

You have the potential to be great the story idea is very good but you have to pay a lot more attention to grammar and spelling. The grammar errors are very distracting making it hard to focus on the plot.

I use Grammarly and it has really helped me become better with my spelling and grammar, please try it and above all - keep writing!

Don't let bad reviews stop you, us it to make yourself and your writing better. The more you try, the better you will become. Good luck.

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