Shawnice_Pate

New York

My name is Shawnice. I am a writer coming from self-expression. It’s bring about black stories and poetry. I treat others the way they would treat me. Enjoy yourselves in your writing.

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The Secret Ingredient
Chapter One

Previously written in my first comment: TOBY.

I've enjoyed the read for chapter one. Each filled with emotion for each POV. Something I can understand from the character's perspective is good in my book. I wanted to review back due to your Review Me comment. The description for them is good and unique. I like that. Plot is told within the POV which I don't see done in the way it was written. Two point of views to each story.

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Hi! I wanted to write back to do a review. I read your story. The plot is good. Still I read about two chapters. It didn't catch my attention too much. I wanted to answer back. My apologies!

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I've read the first chapter! I'm new to your Loyalty book. I like the pacing of the story and where it leads. It's action-themed and the description attracted me to read. Good work. ^.^

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