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A delightful read

This story allows the reader to continue in the lives of the seven princesses but with a twist. They are no longer in their own home but that of a stranger.
The prince is sweet, I'd love to meet him in reality, and the young princess brave in her efforts to save her swan sisters.
The perspective of the swan princesses was a little confusing and I must admit to reading them rather quickly and skipping small parts... Although this may be the case I would love to read another adventure of the princesses as the rest of the story was enchanting, captivating and heroic.
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Short and sweet

The stereotypical Cinderella story has been upgraded and in some aspects improved.
I found the writing style to be captive and finished this short story in one sitting.
The plot is easy to follow and the characters sweet, evil and loyal all in their own.

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A great read

I have to say that I wish this was a published book that I could buy and keep on my bookshelves.
The character Beatrix, Snow White, grabbed my heart within the first few pages and never let it go. I finished this story/novel within just a couple days, I couldn't put it down. The story is great. I'm not fond of the original Snow White fairy tale but I can't say I have very many, if any criticism of the plot of this tale.
I would love to read more of your work!
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Simply amazing

I have to say this has become a rival to my other top two favourite books of all time.
The plot, characters and descriptions are just enough to make me never want to put this down... In fact I read it all in one day!
I really want to thank you for writing this story. I simply loved it and I hope to buy it off a shelf some day!
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I really liked this story :)

I loved the story line,
It's interesting and I didn't want to put it down.
I really hope there is a second and even third part out!
The eyes of the shape shifters is, I thought, a really unique idea that enhances the way we get to understand them as we see their emotions.

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