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Beautiful

I LOVED this book. So much of it reminded me of my 20's. Unfortunately, unlike the characters, I would not have the courage to do it now that I'm older. We had several great years in the lifestyle, but we hit a snag. We brought someone in to our world who was monogamous. She fell in love with my husband and vice versa. She didn't want to share and made my life miserable and convinced my husband I was lying and just wanted attention. We divorced in 2013. His best friend and I have been living together for a long time now and are very happy.

I laughed, cried and was turned on through out this book. Another well written book and I love that it was longer than most of his other books. Great Job!

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Incomplete?

I love all of these stories. I laugh my ass off. This story says it is complete but just kind of stops in the middle. No real ending so I'm sad about that.

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Good

I wish there would have been an Epilogue. I know the story was done but it feels incomplete. Did she get her scholarship, they get married, have kids?

Either way it was a good story.

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Great sequel!

I hope to see a story for each of the boys too. Well done yet again author!

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Need more

I am so glad there is a second book. Going to read it now!

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Wonderful story

This is another great story from this author. I wish it was longer and maybe continued a little further in the future but overall it was great

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Great story

Another great story! I wish some of the chapters were longer but everything else was great!

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Absolutely loved it!

Once again this author has made a beautiful story that captures your heart. So sweet, sexy and sad. Wonderfully writen.

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Amazing

What a wonderful story. Very good job!

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Beautiful

Beautiful and sexy. That ending though killed me but is is more real life than most. Well done.

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Loved it

Loved this story. Well done!

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Loved it

My only complaint is I wish it was longer lol. Loved it! Well done.

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Unusual and amazing 👏 😍

This is such a great story. It's unlike any I have read so far. 🤷 This is well thought out and keeps you intrigued. Well done!

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Suspenseful

Loving this story line 😍

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Unexpected 💎

A great book for the heart, soul and body.

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Wonderful

I LOVE this story. Well done! I have loved all of this authors books.

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intrigued

This is a great story but no indication that it was a first book. Story abruptly stops right in the middle. I hate it when that happens. I will probably never know how it ends. Every time this happens i follow the person but i have too many people followed now and cant keep up.

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Heartbreakingly Wonderful

I loved this story. I cried so many times reading this. It was gut wrenching and amazingly sweet. Would love to see this as a movie.

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wondeful

I loved this story, as I have all of the authors books. As always you have done a wonderful job.

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wonderful

I loved this story, as I have all of the authors books. As always you have done a wonderful job.

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wonderful

I loved this story, as I have all of the authors books. As always you have done a wonderful job.

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wonderful

I loved this story, as I have all of the authors books. As always you have done a wonderful job.

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wonderful

I loved this story, as I have all of the authors books. As always you have done a wonderful job.

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wonderful

I loved this story, as I have all of the authors books. As always you have done a wonderful job.

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Wonderful

I loved this story, as I have all of the authors books. As always you have done a wonderful job.

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Another Hit

I have read all of the books in this series and I can't wait for them to be published to buy. All of these books are amazing. I can't wait to read the next one.

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Amazing

I love the originality of this book. This author is amazing!

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Amazing

I love the originality of this book. This author is amazing!

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Amazing

I love the originality of this book. This author is amazing!

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Amazing

This is the type of book that should be turned into a movie. Wonderful imagination!! Great job!

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Wonderful

I absolutely loved this series. made me laugh and cry. Wonderful job!

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Loved it

I loved this book. You could feel the emotions of the characters and more than once I was sitting here in tears. I will now be reading all of your completed works. Good Job.

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Well done!

I have loved all of Mr. Writer's stories, however, I do believe, this one is my favorite. The amount of research and imagination that went into this book is outstanding. The writing was excellent as always. I felt the story, not just read it. I cried when they cried and I laughed at the situations they found themselves in. I hope more people take the time to read and review because it is worth it.

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Wonderful

Another amazing book by Mr. Writer. I hope there will be a second book with some added single people added to the group.

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loved it

I have read all of the tour series and just finished this on. I love that the author put this book together to get the background for the characters in the tour series. Well done yet again.

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Well done

I enjoyed this story. I do wish it was longer with a little more detail so you could feel the emotion better but the story idea was great.

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Another great story.

My boyfriend of 9 years has always known he wasn't my one true love. He has always known it had been my husband that held that right as my soul mate. He never lets on how hard it must be and I have often thought it would be better for him to find his own one true love but he swears that person is me. We have never married because I told him in the beginning that I wouldn't ever marry again. He has never asked and only brought it up once a year ago by saying he would marry me in a heartbeat if I ever wanted to. I have seen a lot of comments about how people dislike the ending of this story, but to me it is more realistic than the fairytale happy ever after's. Another great job Jadlynn. You are a few months younger than my youngest child and I feel a sense of pride for you every time I read one of your books. I have read all of your completed stories and can't wait for the others to be completed.

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Outstanding

This was an amazing story. So sad but real. I would love to see a second book following Ethan through life to hopefully find happiness. Such an outstanding author for such a young age. I will defiantly buy her books when they start hitting the shelves.

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Wonderful

An amazing story. I wanted to kill the mother by the end. The ending may not have turned out like a fairytale but life never does. I noticed a lot of words that were wrong, not spelled wrong, just the wrong words.

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Fixing you

like many other reviews I will say this, This was a fantastic story. I see people talk about it being too long but that is one of the many things I like about it. There were a few places I skimmed through due to repetitive monolog, but over all amazing. I love the way the author writes.

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Wonderful

I really liked this story. There were times when Viv's monolog would repeat over and over again. I found myself skipping paragraphs or skimming them to find where the story picked back up. Over all though I loved it and I loved the ending. Not the typical happy ending but happy non the less. Good Job!

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Intriguing

I haven't read anything like it. I love it and would defiantly read a follow up.

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Loved it

I love all of Lizzy's books but this one is some funny shit! Check out all of her books.

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Great book!!

This was a wonderful story. I laughed and cried all though out reading it. I would recommend this book for sure.

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Wondeful

I laughed so hard my family thought i was nuts. lol I will read everything this author writes.

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sequel?

I am hoping there will be another book to finish this story. I want to know what happens to Ana and V's step daddy. I loved this story. Defiantly unique.

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Exceptional!

I absolutely loved this book! I will be going to Amazon to read the longer version. You did an amazing job and are very talented.

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Loved this book

Well done, good story.

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Unique

I loved this book. I hope I will be able to find the second one when it comes out.

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Great story

Well done. Now I'm going to read the next one lol

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Absolutely loved it!

I loved this story. It isn't a typical story line. Its creative and smart. Very well done.

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Yet another great story by this author

I can see a sequel to this story. A grown up life with a sinister ex stalking in the background. Well done.

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Excellent story

Yet another story form this author that brings about physical reactions. You know it's a good story when you can laugh and cry.

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An amazing story!

I. absolutely loved this story!

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Well done

This story was well done. I wish the end was a little longer with more detail but over all it was great. I woukd definitely read a sequel.

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Hmmm

The story line is good super super short not complete You have to find the books Before & After in order to complete the story, maybe. I don't know what but wish I could read it all-in-one sitting and in one book.

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Cute story

The story line was great but definitely needs an edit.

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Great story!

I was so happy there was a second book to these stories. Once again you did a wonderful job.

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Amazing

This was such an amazing story. One of those books you can't put down till it's over. Great job.

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Great story.

I loved this unique and amazing story. I was however upset with the way it abruptly ended without finishing the story.

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Wonderful

I loved this story. It reminded me of my 20's. Mmmm the good ol days.

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Intriguing!

I loved this story. It was one if those books you don't put down till its over. Great job!

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Moving

This is a strong and wonderful story. It is gruesome and twisted but then again so are people. This story isn't about the bad in life though, it's about how there is always a way to be free and be yourself. It's about the power we all hold over our own scars. Wonderfully written.

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Wonderful

I love the the twists for the wedding. Haha laughed hard. Great book. Good job.

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So sweet and sad 😥

What a wonderful story. Well written and made me laugh and cry.

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Amazing story!

I love this story. God it makes me miss my 20's so bad. Well done. I woukd love for a sequel to see how they maneuver love. Personal experience tells me it can be amazing or Heartbreaking or a little of both. I woukd definitely be interested in reading that story.

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Loved it!

I absolutely loved the characters and plot. Great job! Please please tell me there story isn't over. I don't usually keep track if updates but I will for this story. Please do us all a favor and give us more. Lol we are greedy, we can't help it.

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Loved it!

I truly enjoyed this story. I prefer reading erotica but there aren't very many completed stories like this one. Great job once again.

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Great

I loved this story. I wish I would have realized this book came before the last one I read. Either way I loved the characters and the story. Great job!

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Wonderful

I was sad the story was over woukd live to have seen further into their relationship. I love this couple. Great job!

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Loved it!

Such a great story. I absolutely love reading polyamorus stories. There is so much love in the end it makes all of the heartbreak leading up to it worth it. Very well written.

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Uniquely wonderful

This was a great story. Maybe someday we can hear about the kids' adventures as well. Very well done!

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Great

Very well done. I loved this story.

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Wonderfully different

I loved this story. It was dark, twisted and beautifully insane.

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Loved it

I loved this story!

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Amazing book! ❤ 💘

I have read so very many books on here and I must say this is one of my top 5 stories. It is also one of two stories that I would lobe to see turned into a movie. It is just that good. Thank you to the author for such a wonderful job. This story was not just entertaining but it brought out a physical reaction. I was reading this while my husband was asleep and I kept laughing. Unfortunately it did wake him up lol. But this book also had me in tears more than once too.

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Loved it

I lobed this story and how the author writes. I only read completed stories and this seems to be the only completed story from this author. I hope someday to read more from this author.

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Sweet

Such a sweet story. There was a lot of important topics in this story. I loved everything about it.

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Great story

I loved this story. I can't wait to read jacks story. He is my favorite character.

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Sweet

I love this story so glad it turned out the way it did

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Good plot

I loved the plot ut wish it could have been longer with more details.

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Great story

Both of these books were great. The story line was crazy and I loved it. I cried a few times 😢 but I also laughed a few times.

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Great book

I libed this plot. There were more grammar mistakes in this one than the others I have read by this author but other than that it was great. I loved the ending and would love to see a second book about the kids and luca's boys. Food for thought.

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Loved this story

I have loved reading this book. Everything I have read by this author i habe loved. Great job

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Wonderful but tragic 😢

This tragic story made me cry several times 😢 😪 💔 But I loved it

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Crazy good

I loved all the twists and turns. This always a great story. Very well done.

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Terrific story!

I loved this story. I can't wait for part 2 to come out. I hope a couple of their kids end up in polyamorus relationships too.

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Love this story ❤ 💕 💗

I absolutely loved this story. Polyamory is hard to pull off so I love reading stories of happy endings. It is very possible to love more than one person.

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Not your typical stepbrother story. ❤

I love this story. I wonder if there will be a spin off about the doctors.

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Great story

I love this story. The plot was great and just when I thought they were going to live happily ever after BAM the crazies came to town.
The beginning did seem a little choppy or something I'm not sure what exactly. When I started it I didn't hold out hope that it was going to be good. Im so glad I was wrong. This was a great story. I would watch it if it was a movie too.

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Yummy

This is a beautifully erotic story.

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So much passion ❤

I read at least 14 hours a day, as I am disabled and don't like to be in my own hopeless mind. This author is extremely gifted. I have read 2 books in this series and I am in awe! I love many books but the ones like these that make you think, feel and have an actual physical reaction are the ones that you truly remember and tell everyone who will listen. Superb job!

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Amazing story ❤

I am loving this story. I love books that cause physical reactions. I have laughed, gasped and cried. Great plot. I can see many book sreming from this one. Would make a great movie.

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Great book

I feel a twist coming

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Amazing story

I hate that people's nasty comments made this author leave this forum. People should be ashamed of themselves.
I loved this book. I laughed, gasped in shock and cried. The author did a great job.

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Hot as hell!

This is an amazing book. Well written and extremely hot 🔥

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Awww

Love sexy secret Santa lol

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Loving ❤ this story

Relationship goals

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Stupid brother

I hope her brother feels like a pos if he ever realizes what she went through.

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Sad story

Sad that she has gone through so much in life just to learn her favorite person was no longer the boy she loved.

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Team Aaron

Lilly deserves to be happy 😊

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Crazy love 💘

Everyone deserves love 💘 ❤ 💕 💗 💖

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Funny and sexy

This book has made me laugh out loud a few times 🤣 😂 😆

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Loving ❤ it

Love this story ❤ 💕

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Steamy

Love the story

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Good story

Love the story line but dislike 👎 the many small chapters.

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Enthralled

I am so swept up in this story I haven't even been leaving comments for the chapters.

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Great job

I'm hoping the three of them get together. I love polyamorous relationships!

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Great book!

I absolutely love this book. I have laughed and cried. I can't wait to see how it all turns out.

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Love this book

Omg her crazy is almost too much already lol

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Crazy ass men

So many things going through my mind.

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Yay

So glad they found each other again!

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In love with this story!

Theo knows what he is talking about. She need to watch herself around that other dude.

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Love hate

I hate that I love this book lol.

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Confused

Dealing with the massive amount of time jumps is confusing. I try to make my own time line as I read it. I do like the story and the graphic scenes. It makes it easier to feel what's happening.

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