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Erotic one shots

All the stories were great. I think some of them can become a whole story. Great work!

My stranger Husband

It's a great read. The plot is different and humour is good. There are some typos and punctuation errors but other than that everything is fine. Great work!!

Immature

I love the flow of the story. The chemistry between the characters is amazing. I only have one problem, probably it's just my opinion but I think the story is to straight forward. A bit of a drama would not have hurt. Other than that every thing is perfect. Great Work!!

Complicated Friendship

The story has a story plot. Your writing style is amazing. The way you have portrait different views is phenomenal. There are many minor errors, which need to be edited. Great work!!

Men that use women

It's a different story. I liked it. There are some minor errors like lack of space between the words, use of punctuation or starting a word with capital alphabet when not needed. It just need some editing. Good Luck!!

Peyton

I loved the story.The interaction between the characters are smooth and the flow of the story is also nice. Great work!!

The girl I used to be

It's a great story. It has lots of suspense. I like how you leaves us with lots of questions after each chapter. Looking forward for more. Great work!!

Quotes

I don't know anything about poetry, so I don't know anything about the way it should be written. But I like the poems as well as quotes. They were easy to understand and have deep meaning. Great work!!

stoic

Author you are a devil. Because of you I have not slept for almost the entire night. I am absolutely in love with the story. It's toxic but I still like it. At some part I was crying and in the end I was smiling through out the chapters. GREAT WORK!!

A cool little hell

I have never read a horror story. I like horror movies but I never thought that it would be interesting to read it. But I was wrong. This story is really good. I absolutely loved it.Great work!!

Phoenix Dai

I liked the story it's very different and interesting. Pheonix is also very interesting.All the characters in the story are as interesting as pheonix. You have developed the character well and the story is well written. Great work.

How mine ends

It's a good story. The plot is very interesting.The start of the story is also strong. But at some parts it's very slow,I started losing interest in it and the flow is also not great. It has lots of potential because the storyline is great, so with some editing it will a great story. Good Luck.

The unnamed

I usually don't read these kind of stories. But this one was really great. It is written perfectly from character, to plot and storyline. It was amazing. I really enjoyed it. Great work.

Nario

It's just my kind of a story, it's dark, have a crazy Male lead, I also like age gap, so is perfect for me and it is also written amazingly. I loved it. I personally don't think that there are much flaws in it , there are some punctuation error, but that can be fixed easily. Great work. Looking forward to more updates.

Great Start

This story has a great start. I am really excited about reading it. However, its only a chapter I can tell it going to be a good story. Eagerly waiting for the next update.

Forced

I loved your story so far. It's interesting. Your writing style is very descriptive and vivid. I was able to imagine what's going on.Great work 👏👏

Good Start!

The story is very interesting. I liked it. It had a great start . Eagerly waiting for more.

Amazing

This story is amazing . The chemistry between the main characters is out of the world. I am in love with it.I started reading it today and I was so hooked that I was not able to keep it away .Great work👏

Amazing

It's a great story.I love the way author have written it. I also like the way how the characters are described. Great style of writing. 👏👏

Amazing

It's a great story. It have everything that a good fantasy story needs. The plot is very interesting and promising.Great work👏👏

My review

It's a great story. The plot is very different and interesting. I love it. Great work. 👏👏

Daddy's Girl

Great start👏👏

Nice

I really like the way you are playing with words. The plot of the story is interesting. I am eager to know what will happen in the next chapter.
But there are some of the things I will like to suggest.
1. It's a bit confusing. I am unable to tell who are you referring to.
2. Please clarify the names of the character.
3. And also please give a brief description about the different characters

Review

The story is very cute. It's just the beginning but I am intrigue to see what will happen as the story goes on.

Review

We decided to read only two chapters for the review swap. But I will continue to read it because it's a great story. The way it is written, the plot has a great grip. Looking forward to read more.

Well done

I liked the story. I would like to point out few things like you skipped a huge period of time. I don't think that was necessary. The male pregnancy is not something I am comfortable with, but thag has nothing to do with your story, it's just my personal preference. The flow of the story is not smooth.

REVIEW

I have never read something like that. It was new for me but I liked it. It is well written. Good Work!

Friday Night Thriller

I usually don't read erotic stories because most of them do not have a good plot or the characters development is very poor. But your story has a good plot and character development is also great. In the terms of writing I didn't find any mistakes. I am glad you changed the point of view. Waiting for further update.

The story of Jane

It's a good beginning of the story but it's need a lot of editing. There are punctuation errors, grammatical errors and the sentences are not start with a cap. letter . All the best!!

Power and duty

The story flows easily and is very easy to understand. The description of the main characters are well written. The characters are very different,so it will be interesting to see how they connect. It's just the beginning so I have lots of questions right now. But I guess I have to wait till the next update. Great work!!

Complexity

It's a really quick and fun read. The chemistry between the characters is amazing. The plot is good. Great Work!

Fragile Things

Since it's the beginning I can't say much but for the start it is pretty good. The plot is nothing different but it is written beautiful. The character development is also good. I think it is too cliché for my liking but it's just the start. Waiting for more.

Selfless

The story is written amazingly. It contains right amount of emotions, twists and turns. I don't read these kind of story and I don't know anything about the wars. But the atmosphere created by author makes it easier to read and enjoy. Great work!!

Whispers of the Heart

( Updated review)

Firstly when I read you stories most of them were not completed.So they did not make sense in my head but now I got the better understanding of them and I want to say you have a beautiful way of writing. Your stories are written amazingly. I don't think there are any mistake in them. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Great work!

Destined to meet

I like the story. It was nothing unique but it was a good read. Your writing style is great. I didn't find any grammatical errors. Great work!

Melody of fame

It's just the beginning of the story so I can not tell much. From the information I have gathered it's a story about a music band.I like stories related to music so I think I will like it.So far so good. Waiting for more updates. Good Luck!!

Smooth Ride

I like the story. Your writing style is descriptive and flows easily. There are some grammatical errors. Great work!!

Cub

The story deals with various topics which are not very common. I like the way you portray the emotions of the Characters. I also feel very bad for the MC. The plot is unique and written beautifully. Great work!!
Looking forward for more updates.

Mia

It's a very engaging story. I liked it. It is simple and good. Great work!!

The wolf

It's only one chapter so I can't tell much about the plot but I think it will be different. Your writing style is unique. It's very descriptive and your vocabulary is also strong. I think the paragraphs are too long but that's just my point of view. Great work!!

Prison of Temptation

The plot of the story is unique. Looking forward for more update.

Review

I like the story. You have explained the other language well.But it is a bit distracting. Your way of writing is somewhat poetic. Great Work!!

Unmentioned things

It's not the type of story I usually read. As I was reading it I got interested. I think it needs a bit of editing but as English is not your native language it's fine.English is also not my native language I know the problems. Other than that the story is great.Good work!!

The Virus

I like the concept of the story. It's unique and interesting. I am looking forward to how to goes. Great work!!

In disguise

It's a interesting story. The plot is good. I like the way you have portrait each character. Maybe it's my personal opinion, but I think the way you structure your paragraphs are kind of confusing. Also, there are some punctuation errors which can be fixed easily. Good Luck!!

The brother and I

It's a amazing story with good amount of humour and drama. I love it. Great work!!

Amaris

It's a amazing story. It's a but rush but still ielts really good. Great work!!

Love on the brain

It's a beautiful story. The flow is perfect and all the characters are amazing. I just feels like the chapters are too long. It's just me, but I like when the chapters are not too long, may be 2000 words.
Other than that it's a amazing story. Great work!!

The rich and the poor

I like the story. I usually don't point out about grammatical errors because I also do them in my stories, but in this story they were distracting me from reading . I hope you will fix it. Good Luck!!

Great start

I love the start of the story. I think the plot of the story will be great. Looking forward to it. I also like how the story flow effortlessly. Good Luck!!

🤩🤩

I like the story The character are realistic and the story not your stereotypically romantic story. But the only problem It have some unnecessary detail which make the flow of the story a bit slow. Great work!!

Loveless Lovers

Honestly speaking I am not into poetry. But your poems were beautiful. Some of them were also really relatable. Great work!!

🤩🤩

It's am amazing story. I like that it have a mysterious vibe. I also like the main characters of the story. The flow of the story is also good. I was not able keep it down. Great work!!

Seth and Jacob

It's a amazing story. I like the main characters and how the conversation flows between them. Great work!!

Love of my life

The story was amazing. It was realistic and the message that the writer wanted to display was delivered perfectly. You have depict the culture amazingly. I really enjoyed it. Great work!!

Count the stars

It's a nice story. I really enjoyed it. Good Luck!!

Her life

The way it's written is very different and very deep. It more dense than a usual story. Great work!!

My half demon

I like the story, it's interesting. The plot is great but there are plenty of grammatical errors which can be rectified easily. Good Luck!!

The Alpha's Affair

So far, the story is amazing. I loved it. The plot is also good. Good Work!!

The Alpha's Affair

So far, the story is amazing. I loved it. The plot is also good. Good Work!!

Reincarnation

I think the story is interesting. The idea to depict the story is also different. But there are lots of minor errors that an be rectify easily. I hope you will rectify them, and then this will a perfect. Good Luck.

The Last

I like the start of the story. The plot is good. But I am not able to follow it. Maybe it is because I usually don't read fantasy or some other problem. I also think at some parts it gets a bit slow too. I hope you will rectify the problem.Good luck.

Bring me the heart of your King

I like the story. It is very interesting. Bit the paragraphs are very long and the are many punctuation errors

Good

The story is great. There are typos and some grammatical errors other than that everything is fantastic. Good work.

🤩🤩🤩

I liked band like the was the story is written and the summary was also written well. Good work.

Broken Halos

OMG!! This story was absolutely perfect.It has lots of emotions. The plot was amazing, the description was perfect and each character was portrait in a great way. Well Done.

🤩🤩

I really enjoyed the story. It's a very good story with great plot and nice characters. It is great that no one is perfect in the story, that makes it more relatable. I think at some parts there should have been more description. But other than that everything is fantastic.

Saved

Personally, I like the story which are dark.So,this was just for me. I loved it. The vocabulary was good . I don't think there was any grammatical or punctuation errors, which is amazing. The description was also accurate. Great work!!

🤩🤩🤩

I like the story. It is simple and relatable. The humor in the story is also good. Good Work !!

Misunderstanding in love

It's a great story. The plot is very realistic and interesting. I love the mc of the story. she is very strong. Your writing style is also good. But it have some problem like it is not structured properly, there are alot of punctuation errors. These all can be rectify easily by editing .Good Luck!

In the dark

The start of the story is interesting. Your writing style is also great .But I feel that at some parts the story is very slow. I didn't find any other major errors. Looking forward for more. Good Luck!

In the dark

The start of the story is interesting. Your writing style is also great .But I feel that at some parts the story is very slow. I didn't find any other major errors. Looking forward for more. Good Luck!

our heart beat together

This story is a emotional rollercoaster. The storyline was very interesting and characters are developed well.Great work!!

our heart beat together

This story is a emotional rollercoaster. The storyline was very interesting and characters are developed well.Great work!!

🤩🤩

The plot is very interesting and different.I like the mc of the story.I didn't find any major mistakes.Good Work.

My rude Husband

I like the plot of the story.Its very interesting but there are lots of grammatical and punctuation errors in it ,which make it difficult to read. It just need some editing.Good Luck.

🤩🤩

The story is good. The starting if the story was not very strong but as it proceed it became good. I like the character and the plot. Good work!!

Obey

It's a amazing story. It is written perfectly. It's very descriptive and the plot is also different. I got all kind of emotion reading it. Great work!!

Queen of death

The start of the story is strong and interesting. I don't think there is any need to put dialogue in italic, It made me confused.There are minor punctuation errors, which can be fixed easily. Good Luck!

Caged

I like it so far. It have a good storyline.My only problem is sometimes the flow breaks in the story and the paragraphs are too long sometimes that makes the story slow. Other than that everything is fine. Good luck.

Snap

This story is relatable ,realistic and entertaining. Every thing is perfect. It's just my kind of story. I loved it.I 😍

Review

First of all, the title is great😂. I loved the way story goes. It got more interesting in every chapter. It got be engaged. There are some grammatical errors but that can be fixed easily. Good Luck 🤗

Spirit of fire

I have never read this kind of fantasy. When I started reading it I thought the it was a bit slow ( just a bit) but then when I read further it got interesting. I love the way you have describe everything all the rules and how the things work, it make the story more understandable.By reading this I can tell that you are a expert in writing these kind of stories. Great work 🤩

Amazing

It was a amazing story. It was interesting and very different. I loved it.Great work 🤩

The rise of Luna

Ii usually don't read werewolf stories. This one was great. I can read and tell that the author is very experienced and skillfully. It is written very well. Great work 👏👏

🤩🤩

It's a great story. The is very descriptive and vivid. I could feel the scenario, which is amazing. Author have done a great job, well done.👏👏

🤩🤩

It's a great story. The is very descriptive and vivid. I could feel the scenario, which is amazing. Author have done a great job, well done.👏👏

Cute

It's a very cute love story. I loved the funny dialogues. It's plot is also very different and interesting. I wish it could be a little longer but still it was a great story, I loved it.

The target

I loved the starting. I thought it would be a amazing story but as the story proceeded it dropped.

Without you

It's a amazing story. I like that the story is very detailed and characters are well written. Great work 🤩

Review

I think it's a nice story. I really enjoyed it. Good Work👏👏

Review

I liked the story.....It's nice....Looking forward to more updates.

Candyland

It was the first time that I have read a horror story and it was amazing. I loved it. Great work 👏👏

Meeting You

There are only three chapter but still it sound sounds interesting,I will definitely read it.👏👏

The dream life

The story is pretty interesting. I liked it. Good work 👏👏

Bad blood

Wow! I loved your work. I have read your other stories they were great and your this story is also amazing. I was hooked from the starting. Great work👏👏

Esther

Wow!I loved the story . It is very unique and different. Your writing style is descriptive and vivid. Great work 👏

the silent witness

Wow!This story is amazing. It is very creative. I loved it. Your writing style is amazing. It is very descriptive and vivid. I was able to imagine everything. Amazing work👏👏

Beautiful Rosa

Good start,there are many errors but still it's good. well done👏

On the outside

Interesting start.....eagerly waiting for the story to begin. 🤗🤗

Good

The story has a good start. I have a sense of mystery that I liked. Great work,👏👏

Melody of tomorrow

First of all the summary is very engaging. The story has a great start. I will be looking forward for more. Great work👏👏

Amazing

This story is amazing . The chemistry between the main characters is out of the world. I am in love with it.I started reading it today and I was so hooked that I was not able to keep it away .Great work👏

The Roommate

It's a good story and your writing style is great but there is nothing new about the plot , it's the same old plot.Also,there are some grammatical errors. Other than that it's a good read, I enjoyed it.Great work.

My Review

It's a very powerful story. The plot is great. The suspense kept me at the edge through out the story. The character are also very beautifully written. There are some minor errors but that can be rectify easily. Good work

Sweet

I liked the story a lot .. Good work 👏👏

Safety of his arms

It's an amazing story . Character development is great and the plot is also interesting. I liked it .Great work

Good Read

I like the story . It is very interesting and different. I also like your writting style . Good work👏👏

The lost pearl

It's a very promising and well-written story. The plot is very intriguing. I was hooked from the beginning of the story. Great work.

Once Bytten

It is a great story. I was hooked from the beginning. The plot is very interesting and different. The author's writing style is great. Great work 👏👏

Accepting the demon proposal

It is a amazing story. The plot is very unique and interesting. Authors writing style is also great. Great work 👏👏

Bright mind

I think it's a good story. The plot is nice. I think the author should have described the character better and there are some grammatical errors.Good work

Emotional Disarray

I was hooked from the starting of the story. The beginning is written perfectly. The plot is also very interesting. I am really looking forward to the story. GREAT WORK

Pride and promises

I am in love with the story . It's one of the best stories that I have read on inkitt. The plot is very interesting and the author have described the characters in a brilliant way . There are some spelling mistakes and the paragraph are very long but other than that it is perfect. l am eagerly looking forward for more update . Great Work👏👏

Hot coffee of love

It's only one chapter so I can not tell much but for the start, I find it quite interesting. I like the way that the authors have described the scenario. I am looking forward to more updates.

Mocta

Great start. The plot of the story is interesting. I am looking forward to the updates. 👏👏

Life is but a dream

It's an interesting story and the characters are also good. I got a bit confused because you don't use quotes . But overall the story is nice.
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Hooked

Amazing start of the story. I was hooked from the starting of the story. Your writing style is also great. Looking forward to the update. GREAT WORK 👏👏

Betrayal

Great start for the story. The plot is interesting and I also liked the way you have described different events. Great job👏👏

Dormant Love

Great start.👏 I am really looking forward to it.

Falling for you

I loved your story. It is very interesting and you have a great style of writing. Great work 👏👏

Misunderstanding

A very sweet little love story.💓 It was an old plot but still, it was a great story and I loved it.
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Bereft

It's a great story. The characters are interesting. Your writing style is very good. I could literally feel the schemes. I am really looking forward to it.
Great work👏👏

My review

It's a great story but the only problem is it has lots of errors. Also in some parts, it's a bit confusing. Other than that the plot of the story is great.

appreciation of grat work

great story ...I love it ...I never felt so connected to a story...great work...I would like to read more of your work..I simply love it