shezz

"Reading is by far the most successful pursuit of happiness "

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Mrinal

It's a beautiful story. The plot is very interesting. The characters and schemes are described perfectly. I loved the story. Great work πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Nice

I really like the way you are playing with words. The plot of the story is interesting. I am eager to know what will happen in the next chapter.
But there are some of the things I will like to suggest.
1. It's a bit confusing. I am unable to tell who are you referring to.
2. Please clarify the names of the character.
3. And also please give a brief description about the different characters

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The lost pearl

It's a very promising and well-written story. The plot is very intriguing. I was hooked from the beginning of the story. Great work.

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Just Breathe

The story is amazing. the author is very talented and written a great story. Your writing style is great. The story smoothly goes with a flow. I really enjoyed it. Great work

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Satisfying

I like the story so far. The plot is good. I like the characters. But still, I was not able to connect with the story. I suggest you break the long paragraphs and add more dialogs and descriptions. Keep up the good up. Good luck

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Above and beyond

I liked the story. It is very refreshing and realistic and the most important thing is that it's not like other teacher-student love stories. The storyline is interesting and the author's writing style is also great.

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Once Bytten

It is a great story. I was hooked from the beginning. The plot is very interesting and different. The author's writing style is great. Great work πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Accepting the demon proposal

It is a amazing story. The plot is very unique and interesting. Authors writing style is also great. Great work πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Untold Darkness

I like that the author has written this story like a play. The story is very interesting and your writing style is also great. I am looking forward to another update. Good work.

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Bright mind

I think it's a good story. The plot is nice. I think the author should have described the character better and there are some grammatical errors.Good work

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Emotional Disarray

I was hooked from the starting of the story. The beginning is written perfectly. The plot is also very interesting. I am really looking forward to the story. GREAT WORK

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Pride and promises

I am in love with the story . It's one of the best stories that I have read on inkitt. The plot is very interesting and the author have described the characters in a brilliant way . There are some spelling mistakes and the paragraph are very long but other than that it is perfect. l am eagerly looking forward for more update . Great WorkπŸ‘πŸ‘

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Hot coffee of love

It's only one chapter so I can not tell much but for the start, I find it quite interesting. I like the way that the authors have described the scenario. I am looking forward to more updates.

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Mocta

Great start. The plot of the story is interesting. I am looking forward to the updates. πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Life is but a dream

It's an interesting story and the characters are also good. I got a bit confused because you don't use quotes . But overall the story is nice.
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Hooked

Amazing start of the story. I was hooked from the starting of the story. Your writing style is also great. Looking forward to the update. GREAT WORK πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Betrayal

Great start for the story. The plot is interesting and I also liked the way you have described different events. Great jobπŸ‘πŸ‘

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Unspoken Love

It's a great story. The plot and the characters are very interesting and unique. It's very different from all the mafia love stories which I have ever read.
Great work. πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Dormant Love

Great start.πŸ‘ I am really looking forward to it.

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Falling for you

I loved your story. It is very interesting and you have a great style of writing. Great work πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Misunderstanding

A very sweet little love story.πŸ’“ It was an old plot but still, it was a great story and I loved it.
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Bereft

It's a great story. The characters are interesting. Your writing style is very good. I could literally feel the schemes. I am really looking forward to it.
Great workπŸ‘πŸ‘

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My review

It's a great story but the only problem is it has lots of errors. Also in some parts, it's a bit confusing. Other than that the plot of the story is great.

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appreciation of grat work

great story ...I love it ...I never felt so connected to a story...great work...I would like to read more of your work..I simply love it

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