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The plot is fresh and enticing. The twists and new changes to characters are also very refreshing and compatible with the whole theme of the story.
It is a wonderful story which links straight to Snow White, and can be written into a series of retold fairytales. A very nice touch to the whole ending.
However, character personalities can be developed further. The writing in the beginning is the most important, the hook to all audience to continue reading, the hook wasn't strong enough. Only from the third chapter onwards did the story pressed me to read continuously.
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