Shreya Das

@shreyadasKolkata

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If you want a story version of rom com then this is your stop. The characters are really sweet and endearing. Not too many plot twists. Just a calm, pleasant, relaxing story. Loved it. Keep up the good work.

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The plot of the story is really good, it is filled with humour, and has the potential to capture a huge audience. But , without meaning to discourage you. I have to say that there are a lot of grammatical errors. Due to those errors it was becoming difficult in understanding the text sometimes. And you might also need to work upon the character build ups and the relationship build up of the characters. It felt like as if the entire story was quite rushed. The relationship between Violet and Reed was not developed properly. It felt like as if something was missing all the time. And in some scenarios, even the facts mentioned at the beginning of the Story became something else at the end. Like for example, at the beginning of it was mentioned that Violet had ridden many bikes so she was very comfortable and used to it but in the later chapter it was said that Violet was scared of riding a fast bike. If you could please look into these issues, I personally think that you have a great book in your hands. Keep up the good work. All the best.

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One of the sweetest, cutest, endearing stories that I've read till date. The relationship build up of the characters were fast paced but suited their personalities and situation. Absolutely in love with the story. Keep up the good work. All the best.

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Light-hearted , sweet and endearing story. Not too many plot twists. Enjoyed reading it. Just a few grammatical errors here and there which can very easily rectified.

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Loved the storyline. Its an amazing book but there was something that kept bugging me. It felt as if many of the serious scenes in the story were dealt very lightly. Like the starting of the serious scene was very intense but all of a sudden it ended very abruptly. Other than that everything else was really good. I had a really good experience while reading this story. Keep up the good work. All the best. 👍😊

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I have no words to describe how much I love and adore the stories written by you. Starting with the 'The Boy I Knew' , my appreciation for your works has gone uphill only. This story also did not disappoint me. From the easy going flow, sweet romance to the kind of emotions portrayed by the characters that we can all relate to , it was a very heart touching story. Keep up the good work. All the best 👍 😊😍

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This was a really very heart warming story. The common , day to day happenings of Kellan and Aiden's are so beautifully portrayed that it would make your heart coo.

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This is a very sweet and endearing story with a fresh plot. The flow of the story is captivating. Really loved reading it. Keep up the good work. All the best.

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This is a nice story with great potential but it was still lacking that spark somewhere in the plot. The plot needs to be a bit more constructive so that it can capture the readers' complete attention. Other than that it was a pleasure reading your story. Keep up the good work.

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This is a very humorous story. The plot is very entertaining. Keep up the good work. All the best.

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