Shreya Yeolekar

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Warm and fuzzy

This novel is a feel good type of story which slowly drags you into it...I like the main protagnist but I could with some introduction to Stefan as well.

I want to see them banter more (guilty demands😁)

But the writing style is superb and dialogues are witty which kept me hooked up.

Amelie is a real sweet gal to spend time with and her thoughts are hilarious which will surely keep you reading.

All in all the story felt good but is yet to progress much and hopefully I will end up liking Stefan as much as Amelie😏😌😁❤❤❤

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A very interesting read

Initially the story starts of like any other fantasy novel. But the second chapter really pulls you in.

The personal connect with the human character is build pretty fast. It feels real and fast...you Alma to find him , to know what happens next, to know what happens to her.

The emotions are described really well. The writer takes the pains to dwell into small details helping the reader to drown more into the plot.

And the plot is amazing I feel. The story holds a lot of potential and is really very intriguing.

Like earlier reviewers, I am hooked and cannot wait to read the next update.

P.S. Just one small feedback, shorter sentences would help amplify the descriptions more is what I feel. I am no professional, but as a reader long sentences tend to loose my short attention span.

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