Sahineish Joy Hayslett

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Needs an editor

No offense, but I’m not entirely sure if English is the first language of the author. The quantity of the grammatical errors indicate that it isn’t. The premise of the first chapter could be executed better, maybe if the flashback was the prologue or started the novel. Overall, the errors with grammar kept me from finishing the 1st chapter. Definitely needs an editor.

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