simi betageri

Belgavi, karnataka, India

Student

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needs improvement

i like the plot, the beginning is pretty good. but you obviously need to work on you're grammar, i suggest reading it once before you finalize it. there are some sentences i couldn't understand so, i had to re-read it. overall i would say that it's a good story but it get better, if you focus and don't mix-up the words, it's kind of confusing at some sentences.

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interesting

love the beginning! with just reading the first three chapters i could tell this book is going to be great. i just hope it doesn't turn out to be like those cliche werewolf book, overall i can just say that it's got a good plot, and this book has great potential, there are some grammatical errors but no worries it's nothing that can't be fixed .so, great job

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interesting

form what I've read so far, i can tell that the story is going to be great. but can be better. because i have read so many werewolf novels that the plot seems a little bit predictable. i'm not a very good writer myself so getting new ideas can be a problem, but it can be improvised. so good story so far, waiting for the rest of the story.

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