L. K. Peyote

Writing it's about being free, is about real liberty, about being brave enough to not care about what others would think, it's about having the courage to say the things that others can't.

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To live or to die

It's quite a unique story...it definitely makes you emotional...

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The comeback of Lorenzo

It first cached my attention because of the title, it makes you thrilled and it makes want to know more about the story. The story keeps you fascinated and interested until the very end when I started reading I couldn't stop.
I can't wait to read more by this author!

A little piece of advice: there are some punctuation and grammar mistakes, so if you want to improve it a little, you should check out "Grammarly" - it's an app that helps with them!

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The Experiment

Wow...just wow...it definitely deserves to be read...

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Different...unic I might say

The book it's like a different world...full of confusion, but also truth. It's something about this book that makes you read it...it's not the plot, but the honesty from it. It's a truth that not many people can say...

There are some mistakes with the punctuation and grammar, but they don't stand out.

Overall I loved it...you should continue writing. Dear author, you have a unic style that makes you different from the others, may this be the thing that raises you ☆

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Savage little nerd

I am still reading it, but I have a lot to say.

First, I underestimated this book, but after I started reading...wow, just wow. This book is amazing, and even if this kind of book is not my type, I couldn't stop reading.

Hunter is such a simple but at the same time complex character. It first shows as a typical nerd, but after reading more of this book you realize that you have at least one thing in common with him. Every single person can relate to him, even if it doesn't look like it at first.

This book is funny, is interesting, is everything I could fish for, I love the author's irony and I'm talking serious when I say that the author MUST continue writing. It became basically his duty towards the world. I can promise you, my dear author, that if you could publish it in stores and online, you would be the version of J.K.Rowling but without writing fan-fiction.

The only thing you need to change is punctuation and grammar, there are a lot of mistakes.

My dear author, you're amazing.

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K.A.O.S.

I don't have much to say about this book, it's interesting, it's fascinating...I loved it. The only advice for the author is to watch the grammar and punctuation and to continue writing because there is a lot of talent and potential waiting to be used!!

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Children without hope

When I read something, the best thing that can happen is to feel that is easy to imagine the scenes and everything. This first chapter has something that not all books have - it transposes you in your own world, no matter how that looks for you.

There are some grammar mistakes, but they don't stand out, and I didn't find it bothering.

My advice for the author is to continue writing the next and then the next chapters. The curiosity is eating me alive!

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Love @ ATM

I have read the story with lots of interest. It shows the simple, but true reality that comes together with romance and fiction.

The only thing that bothered me was the unctuation and grammar - they need to be fine-tuned.

Even if the plot it's quite common, but the story is interesting in its very own way. I would say that it's perfect for anyone that wants a break from real-life problems.

I hope to see more books from you!

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Random Poems

This book makes you feel understood...it's written well, the author makes a connection with you through it

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The Villa

It's an interesting story that keeps you thrilled by the romance and mysterious characters.

For the author! Keep writing, don't give up or feel down because the story is not popular yet. I said yet, because I'm sure that by sharing it with friends, family...anyone you will get honest reviews and you will be able to improve your writing and make it even better!

I'm looking forward to read more stories written by this author, it's clear to me that the author has something special...

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Beyond the scars

I strongly believe that the story deserves more attention. The author doesn't make obvious grammar mistakes and the story it's easy to read. I think it would be better if the story wasn't organized in chapters because it's very short, so it would be better to just put it as a short story.

I liked a lot the story overall, it's short, but the message is important and clear.

The story deserves to be read by more people!!

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Captivity

I think the author really has talent and an incredible imagination. I have to say that the plot of the story rewarded the grammar mistakes, which were a lot. If the author would work on punctuation, grammar, spelling, his or her books would have a total success. I want to encourage the author to continue working, because he/she has a lot of potential!

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THE CRADLE SNATCHER

In my opinion, the author of this book has a unique and fascinating writing style, because the actions are very connected, helping me imagine better the story. Even if I can see some grammar mistakes, they are not that obvious. For me it's clear that this captivating chapter is only the beginning of an amazing book.
I think that the author should continue the novel, since in my opinion it has an interesting subject, it is written with care and essential details.

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