Simon Williams

Tiverton, Devon

I am someone that writes in their spare time. Horror is my bag. So I can let my sick and twisted mind free. I really shouldn't be followed by anyone. My Twitter is @simonwilliams80

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Life is precious

Really liked this story. Some really good descriptive work, and in my opinion just the right amount of conversation. It did remind me ever so slightly of the movie "Final Destination", which isn't a criticism, its just what I personally get reminded of. I really enjoyed it though. Well done.

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Good read

Liked this short story a lot, and makes me want to read more. Love the way the scene is played out. My only criticism of it is, its too short. I would love to see the author use this as a prologue, and then run with it. Excellent idea, and could lead onto a much longer story.

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