sirknightly

hello hello! I'm just a person who loves to write twisted romances about twisted people. pronouns they/them

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Adored!

I tremendously enjoyed your book! I loved the characters and setting you created. You took a common story and really turned it into something special. The way you wrote Red was just amazing. She was a spitfire and completely original. You wrote really well for her age and the diagloge was really realistic, nothing felt cringy or awkward. Something I also enjoyed is how well your writing flows. There are a few mistakes but all very minor. Nothing to hard to fix, just give it a once over. Keep writing

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Interesting idea but needs some work!

I think you did a really good job fleshing out your main characters. They have a very realistic sibling bond and their conversations flow very well. I also think you did a good job describing each characters feelings. My only real issues are I think its paced a little fast. Sometimes I wasn't totally sure what was going on because of editing mistakes and run on sentences. Which is unfortunately because I really do like the plot. I think once you clean this up a bit it would really shape info a wonderful story and people would love to read. Keep wring !

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Cute and realistic!

I found myself surprisingly drawn in by the authors quirky writing style and dialog. The way they shape the character really mirrors kids of the same age and the child like way there thoughts process. The plot is curious and definitely leads you into wanting to know more. Im very eager to see what the author is going to do with each character. The only real issues I had was simple grammer and editing mistakes. Nothing else. Keep writing !

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Interesting!

I enjoyed the premise of the story and found it quite cute. I also really liked how Kat wasn't a run of the mill female love interest. I LOVED how the BDSM was portrayed as very loving too, which often gets lost from plots with BDSM. I don't offen see with MFM couples the males being involved with each other so I loved how Tony and Keith were a couple first. Overall this book is very cute and original and I commend the author for that. I did think the pacing was kinda fast and I found myself having to reread parts over again. But for not being a naive English speaker the grammer wasn't horrible. Nothing that can't be fixed later! Keep writing !

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I really enjoy what im reading so far !

I personally don't really like fluffy romances with sex on sex on sex so I loved this story so far. I love how its dark and grity without being to much. Nothing feels forced, it all flows very well. I love the mixture of different themes as well. Overall a very good read!

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Super cute and unconventional!!

I really like how this isn't a run of the mill rom com. Its diffrent and I really appreciate the style of your writing as well. There are a few grammer mistakes but im assuming this is rough draft so its okay and can always be fixed later. Keep writing !

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Very engaging!

I noticed a few errors in your writing, nothing extremely bad but enough where it distracted me from what was going on. I also had trouble telling who was talking at a few points. Your writing style is one I typically go for but I found myself liking it more as the novel went on. It had twists and turns which kept you sucked in their world. Overall I tremendously enjoyed your work and with a little clean up this would turn into a wonderful novel

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Great mystery!!

This novel isn't something I'd typically read, but I can honestly say I loved it. The authors style of writing really gives an old school detective vibe. It's very unique and leaves you eager for more. The first chapter really pulls you in and sets the stage for the rest of the novel perfect. I noticed a few errors but nothing that takes away from this spectacular work

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Highly Intriguing!!

Honestly, I found almost no errors. The author really quotes a unique cast of characters that leaves you wanting more. I really enjoyed every chapter so far. The writing style is phenomenal! I adore all the details and back story they put in to build there characters. The plot is getting more and more complex and I can't wait for more.

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Phenomenal characters !

I absolutely am in love with your main character! I love the way your write her and her interal struggle with who she is and who she was raised to be. I am not normally a fan of "sold" stories but this one is so original and aboksitelg captivated me from start to finish. I honestly love the whole idea of this story is one I haven't seen before. Keep writing !! You ae doing an amazing job!

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Sexy and a great read!

I absolutely loved this! The author really build up the tension between each character in a way that makes you want to keep reading. I noticed a few mistakes but nothing awful. It could just use a little clean up and then would be perfect. I can't wait to read more. The dynamic between the characters was absolute dynamite!

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Extremely well written

Overall I tremendously enjoyed the start of this story. The characters were written in a way that is easy to follow and easy to get into their minds. The story also leaves you with many different questions in a way that really captures your attention. I noticed one or two grammer errors but other than that it was perfect. Huge congratulations to the author for such a strong and intriguing plot! Keep writing! I can't wait for more

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Adored

I noticed very few grammer errors or spelling errors in this novel which made it very easy to read. I love the character development as well. I could really get into their heads and understand why they are doing the things they do. Additing Irish? I think really added an amazing layer to your writing. This book is definitely going in my favorites. Overall just 10/10. There wasn't anything I didn't like.

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A thrilling read!

I adore this book so far! The characters are so interesting and each have so many layers. Xavier and Vincent have such an complex and addicting dynamic. The connecting they have you write super well. The inter struggle Xavier is having is written really well. Honestly this is just overall a great read and I can't wait for more.

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Descriptions very well written!!

Normally I don't care for book with this style of plot but I really enjoyed this one. There were very little mistakes and the mistakes they were are super easy to fix. Just a few run on sentences and bad grammer. Nothing that distracted me from the novel. I overall really enjoyed it! At first I was like ok this is gonna be a little cliche but I was pleasantly surprised at how original the characters were written. Your dialog flowed really well and was easy to ready. Keep writing!

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Good characters but needs work!

You have a really good cast of characters! Each is unique and has their own traits. I had a hard time figuring out the plot and had to reread a few chapters because I had trouble understanding what was happening. Overall the whole book needs a lot of editing and revision. Once I did figure out the plot, it's a enjoyable story. I like the idea behind it and I love the extanges between character. You have a good thing ! It just needs some work, which is completely okay. Keep writing! I'd love to reread this when it's edited so I could truly enjoy the marvelous world you've created.

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Excellent!!!

Your technically writing skills are almost perfect! There are almost no grammer errors or editing issues. The only thing I noticed is there are a few run on sentences. The details in your writing are absolutely phenomenal. I adore the characters and the world you've created. You are a naturally talent writer and it definitely shows. I can't wait to see what else you come up with. Again, just absolutely lovely. I'm adding this book to my library and can't wait for more !

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Good idea! Execution needs works

The idea behind this book is really good. I think it is overall an enjoyable read but the pacing, editing, and word choice made it really hard for me to really dig in the story. There were a lot of issues with pacing (for me personally) and over all grammer. The love story at its core does pull you in and you want to know why the characters are they way they are. With more cleaning up, this could shape up to be a really good story a lot of people would love to read! Keep writing !

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Engrossing start to finish

Writing multiple POV is a bold choice that either works or doesn't. You have managed to make it work extremely well. I love how you can see the connection between the characters without it being written. Each character is so proudly unique is really draws you in. I love each chapter and seeing what happens. The pacing is also really well fun. It never feels dull or a drag fo read. There are a few grammer errors but thats okay. They can always be fixed later. Overall, amazing job!

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Has potential!!!

I think this could use a lot more work and would have a amazing story after. I wasn't a fan of the style of writing. It killed the flow of the story and I found myself having to go re read parts of the story because i was confused. There were a couple of grammer errors but nothing that can't be fixed. My writing is rough draft too so I completely understand. Don't give up! Your ideas are wonderful!! They just need to be a little better shaped.

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Great chapters!

There were a few errors, im assuming this is a rough draf like my mine so I completely understand. Nothing that can't be fixed. I love the character's building and the way they interact with eachother. I think the main character could use a bit more detail to really build the character but becides that, you didn't a fantastic job. I absolutely adore your writing style. This is a very unique take on writing! Keep going.

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This had my attention within minute's!

I wasn't sure what to expect going going into this book but I found myself presently surprised. I love the way you build the dynamics between the characters. It is written so smoothly, which is is a hard thing to do correctly but you did it! I thoughtly enjoyed hour originally work. Please keep writing !! :)) im excited to see more !

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Completely original!

This is the type of book I would usually real but once I started it, I was hooked. You created such intriguing characters that makes me want to learn more about them. I love the way you write dialog and describe the surroundings. The detail is amazing and I'm really getting into the general vibe of the story. Keep writing! Im excited to see where this goes.

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