One of the best stories I've read in a good while.
I love this story and if I had to rate it I would give it a 9 out of 10. The plot itself is engaging and without giving much away the main character acts like a normal human being would, with thoughts and emotions. She's not just there to move the plot along. The writing style is simple and easy to follow without being distracting. You could easily picture yourself in the same situation. There were few if any mistakes in punctuation, grammar, etc.
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This is a must read and one of the best fan stories I've ever had the pleasure to read. If I didn't know better this could be it's own novel.