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Great First Chapter!

Ne, this is a really good start to a wonderful chapter! It has a plot I've never been exposed to before and I'm definitely looking forward to more. The descriptions were so well-written they were very graphic and some words and paragraphs were very powerful.
Itachi, being blind, able to describe Sakura in such a way proved how professional he really was. It was a realistic and interesting chapter, even on the first. I also loved Sakura's point of view-- the fact she was needed by the fallen man. The plot has no holes and has a lot of potential.
I look forward to reading more! <3

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