sjwilke

Viperia

Creating stories that make you lose time, fall into another place, and leave reality.

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Cute story

I would call this a rough draft. I often could not tell who was speaking and I found numerous errors where the wrong word was used or a word was missing. The writing style was a little choppy as was the flow of the story, at times.
The plot was good and the story was cute, but could be so much more. The author was able to create good suspense and tension.

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