Jim Ahiers

Omaha

An aspiring writer. I enjoy science fiction, graphic novels, comic books, and the outdoors.

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Collective Minds

Aliens conquer the earth, and a scientist and soldier are the only two hopes for saving mankind. By utilizing alien time travel technology, they jump back to a point before the onslaught and formu...

Scifi by Jim Ahiers • Complete • 24 chapters

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"Love and War: The evacuation of Sunshine by MLMarty
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Well written, with very concise grammar, usage, and punctuation. As short stories go, it was very fluid and easy to read. The tension and the drama were very real, and the misery of war was easy to feel in the dialogue. I enjoyed the vivid picture that it painted. Hats off to the author for a job well done.

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