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Fun dynamics between the leads

I liked the golden retriever energy (darker) from mmc and black energy from fmc.

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Deliciously dark

Very twisted but really enjoyable so far can’t wait for the subsequent updates

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I liked the idea of plot and writing it was a quick fun read

I liked the idea of plot and writing it was a quick fun read

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Loved it

I like reading it wouldn’t mind an extended version of this

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Loved the writing

I loved the writing a lot. I hope you write more

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Love it

I really love the story so far I hope you continue it.

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It's good so far keep it up!!

It's good so far keep it up!!

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