partners in arson
Hello, I love the way you capture interest from the start and make me want to read on. I gave you a 4 stars for grammar because nobody gets it perfectly right (including me) and if there are any mistakes I missed them. :) Back to the book.
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Loving it so far, you are managing to keep the mystery ongoing..Looking forward to the rest.
I am still feeling a bad outcome to the story, something nasty lurking around the corner, Hiding the truth to why this child is not with her parents.Keep writing.
Another delightful chapter.... keep going it is intriguing. There are a few grammatical errors ,
you can do a quick edit for that. It is time to give us more now.We are all anxiously waiting :).
I just added a new story, maybe you could take a peek , please. Title : The
Upside of Parkinson's.