the six guardians
I only had a few minutes to spare but I got hooked straight away, I am looking forward to reading it all.I have dedicated this evening to do just that.I will turn off the phone and the tv and have a full immersion of fantasy that I am sure I will get from your story.Well done.
Read the story now
As I said earlier , your story takes me back to when I played the video games , Zelda and Final fantasy with my son (he is 37 now and still playing).Your story could well be turned into a video game, each chapter a different level with a different task to accomplish.
I know that your story is aimed at a younger audience but I really enjoyed it, you are only as old as you feel, I could picture the scenes in my mind as I read and that is what fantasy should do. If you have checked out my story on Amazon you will see I have plenty of fantasy myself, even at my age. So keep up the good work, the more you write the better you will become.
Altogether an easy read, fast moving it kept my attention ( which is hard with Parkinson's ) and made me want to keep reading.Well done and good luck. Pauline