snowfly

complexity

Hello, I am really liking your story so far, and your fluid way of writing. The characters are quite intense and interesting .It's difficult to guess what way they will go, keeping us guessing. I will review again further into the story. Keep writing. Well done.

forget me not

Love it already. A dark retake of Alice.Not my usual type of read, I found it intriguing and interesting. It has made me think how fairy and fantasy stories could come so close to being horror stories.Your story flows quickly keeping the reader glued., anticipating the outcome. Well done

partners in arson

Hello, I love the way you capture interest from the start and make me want to read on. I gave you a 4 stars for grammar because nobody gets it perfectly right (including me) and if there are any mistakes I missed them. :) Back to the book.
Loving it so far, you are managing to keep the mystery ongoing..Looking forward to the rest.
I am still feeling a bad outcome to the story, something nasty lurking around the corner, Hiding the truth to why this child is not with her parents.Keep writing.
Another delightful chapter.... keep going it is intriguing. There are a few grammatical errors ,
you can do a quick edit for that. It is time to give us more now.We are all anxiously waiting :).
I just added a new story, maybe you could take a peek , please. Title : The

Upside of Parkinson's.

devil's heartless beauty

Yes, enjoying the story so far.It sounds as though it will be interesting.You need to brush up your English a little bit, it would help the story immensely.. Well done for the effort,keep studying you will improve with time, I can imagine your story is excellent in your native language.Your English is really very good, just needs a bit of polish.Looking forward to the next chapter.
When you say 'cabin do you mean office.

momma's lil' angel

hi. i am not into horror but I will try to be unbiased. Original as a story and plot.Well written. Even if I don't like horror I was glued to keep reading until I was too spooked out to carry on...sorry, my problem not yours. Well done. am sure horror lovers will rate it highly, it deserves it.