SoftSoprano

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UGH 😍

So, I’m an absolute SUCKER for supernatural plots! I think that the character development is wonderful, and I feel that this is SUCH a solid story. The only thing I can say that’s constructive about it is that the chapters are a little long for my taste, and sometimes it’s hard to stay engaged. (That’s strictly personal preference). Another thing I can say is that if you worked on showing and not telling a little more, it would make this EVEN better! Overall, a really wonderful and stimulating work! Great job!

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So Fun!!

I love how right into the story the author gets! The plot has so much potential for a longer, captivating read!
There are a few grammatical errors, but I only noticed because I was looking! I'm so excited to see where this story goes and how well it does! The only reason I didn't give a 5/5 is because there's not much to go off of,,,yet. ;) Please keep updating, and keep up the good work!

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Poetic

I feel like this has so much potential! It's off to a wonderful start! I'm a tad confused, but I think I get the gist of it! I like it! I'm getting a really strong poetic and Shakespearean vibe from it. Maybe Lys has PTSD? I'd love to see more! I'm also getting a really strong Lady Macbeth vibe from her too. I love that play so, of course, this really resonated well with me. It was a very smooth read. I'm so so curious, and I can't wait for more!

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