Sonya Gammon

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I want to see the finished product

I want to know what happens next. The author needs to pay more attention to when to use a comma and when to use a period, though. Also, the characters need more fine-tuning and the dialogue needs polishing, but I was hooked for sure. Keep writing!

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Review of first chapter

The writing needs more focus. I loved the blurb, though, so the next chapters should be interesting. It was hard to get into the story also because of the grammatical errors. For example, it is "coat of arms" instead of "cote of arms." Periods also belong inside quotation marks. More commas and periods are needed throughout the text and the chapter is riddled with sentence fragments. However, there's a story here. Keep writing!

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