Sophia Martin

Burgundy, France

Professional writer from CA with a penchant for history & fantasy. Happy to give feedback; post on my wall. Just remember, if you asked me for my feedback, you're going to get...my feedback! ;)

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Enjoyable and intriguing.

I enjoyed the first chapters of this story. I particularly like the characterization of Cameron, I feel like he's interesting and well-drawn. The problems faced by these characters feel real and compelling. Hope to see more of the story!

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Exciting start.

I have read all the chapters out so far and I'm hoping to read more! The characters feel very real and the promise of the affair to come is tantalizing. :)

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Poetic mini stories

If you enjoy poetry and the creative combination of words to convey emotion, you'll enjoy this. There are grammatical issues that detract from some passages, and some of the poems are not easy to understand. However, others are really compelling. I recommend it to anyone looking for an emotionally charged, quick read.

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Sweet beginning

This story starts with a strong sense of conflict and stakes, letting you know right away what the problem is and what the character wants. I feel it could be developed more in several ways, and I hope that as the author continues to work on it, she'll explore that. This story will please anyone who loves the theater and who can relate to a break up.

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If you're looking for lyrical poetry, this is for you.

The author uses strong imagery and well chosen words to create a poetic experience. She starts the book by dedicating it to her mother, which I found compelling. I didn't find much story there, so if you are looking for that, this isn't going to be satisfying. But if you want to take a moment to just enjoy language, you will enjoy this book.

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Super fun and eery!

I got hooked right away when I started this story. The mystery starts right from the first chapter and I couldn't wait to find out what was really going on.

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Mermaid story!

I love mermaids, and this story is gettin goff to a great start. The writing is excellent from a technical and a narrative standpoint. Can't wait to read the rest. :)

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