Sophie

York

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Beautiful

Overall this book is well structured and thought out. You immerse the reader in Evelyn's world and we get to explore how she feels.
Where to improve:
- Grammar: some sentences don't make sense and there are a few grammar errors.
- Description: your characters are amazing, though you're not descriptive enough about the world they are in. Adding some description to the world would make the story even more immersive.

Keep it up xx 💜

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