Sophie_Leo03

Hey! I always have my head in a book I am also open to do a review swap <3

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Beautifully written

I loved how you wrote the characters and how the plot was so exciting I couldn't stop. I related to the main character so much I felt myself nodding along agreeing with them at times. Having Greek Mythology made it that much more interesting. I can't wait to read on!!!

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Detailed, Entertaining.

This story was very entertaining, written very smoothly and well paced. Very good read of what you have uploaded so far. There were a couple of gramma mistakes but not really noticeable. I very much enjoyed this story and can't wait to see where this story goes! <3

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Entertaining and sweet

The detail in which you write this story is so well written. The way you described the surroundings and the people made me think i was really there. I felt a whole roller coaster of emotions in chapter 4 and I was on the edge of my seat dying to find out what happens!! Such an intriguing read, I loved it!

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Intriguing Read

Very compelling plot, a beautifully designed cover I love it! Very nice suspense written, smooth and consistent. I enjoy what i have read so far of this book. Can not wait to see how this evolves.
Really strong story, loved it so far!!

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Suspenseful, Impactful

Very full of drama and it was an exciting plot from what I've read so far (9 chapters). So many twists and turns it made me feel like it was real. Your writing style was very insightful and I love the cover and blurb, really good. I am looking forward to reading what happens next, I definitely recommend this to everyone!!

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Suspenseful

Right from the start it was suspenseful and i couldn't wait to find out what would happen, each chapter had some sort of cliff hanger and i was hooked. i really enjoyed this story so far, cant wait to read more!!

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Realistic and Detailed

I can not express how much I loved your writing style, so detailed and unlike anything I have read in a long time! Your describing is in a way that makes me visualize everything you are trying to put across, very strong!!
From what I have read this is a very intriguing story and it is clear that this book has massive potential, I can't wait to keep reading!! I enjoyed reading this!!!

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Beautiful, Relatable, Real

I felt all the emotions as I read each of your poems. It was written so beautifully I was sad to find that I got to the last page. I hope you upload more!! I loved each and every one and the aesthetics you used fit perfectly with the poem. I enjoyed this so much!!!

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Couldn't put it down

I absolutely loved this story. The images at the top of each chapter were so beautifully illustrated, it made visualizing so much easier. Your writing style was so unique and the whole story was so interesting I had to see what happened next. This was such a beautiful story so far, the friendship between Cameron and Hunter was so heartwarming. I loved every second of what I've read so far, cant wait to read the rest!!

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Thrilling Roller Coaster

I felt a whole range of emotions reading this, the style of writing was so good it made me feel everything the character was feeling. Very entertaining and made me on the edge of my seat. I loved the way the titles were, different fonts, mixed fonts, bold. Very eye catching and really well done!! I can't wait to read more!!
I loved this story, I recommend this so much!!!!!

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Incredible story

This book was so entertaining I couldn't wait to see what happened next. Your writing style flowed really well and I really like how detailed you described everything. I will definitely keep reading!
Very full of suspense and action, very thrilling read. I really enjoyed this!!

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Sweet read.

I was very hooked from the beginning, its such a sweet (and also spicy ;) ) romantic story. Very entertaining and intriguing, beautifully written. I like the fact that Lucas was a fake name so Kai could be a real person without the weight of the crown. Such a unique writing style I can't wait to carry on reading and see how the story progresses. So far I love it!!

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Really nice story

From the chapters i have read so far it seems like a very nice story, strong dialogue, nicely written. I've enjoyed it so far. Really sweet and great descriptions.

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LOVED IT!!!!!

I absolutely loved this story!!!! So beautifully written, l adore your style of writing. I honestly couldn't turn away I just needed to know what happened next. Suspense, Comedy, Romance, Friendship. IT'S ALL THERE AND PERFECT!! Words can not express how sweet this story is, I can not wait to read the next chapters!
So good! :)
I loved it <3

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Poetic and Moving

The way you write is so beautiful, I related a lot with the MC and it was clear the message you were trying to put across. Style of writing felt so poetic and delicate, I really enjoyed this book.
When writing a dialogue on what a character is saying, maybe have italics just for the thoughts instead of on the communication side?
Overall I really liked this, very strong building, language and visuals. It resonated with me in a lot of ways. I felt very attached to the MC. Well written, looking forward to reading other works of yours. :)

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Beautifully written

Very beautifully written. I really liked the way you described everything and made me feel like I was in the story. So far it's a strong start, I can't wait to read more!
I felt it was very heartwarming and I found myself laughing along with the characters.
In a particular part the main character feeling insecure when looking around at everyone while in her own baggy clothes. I really related to this and you wrote it in a way that was so sweet and understandable that I wanted to help her and give her a hug.

The only thing i would say is go through and look at the gramma, E.G. There is a part where there is a slash instead of a full stop. :)

Overall I really enjoyed this story. Keep up the great writing!

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Beautiful, Relatable, Real

The writing style was beautiful and I really related to the poems I've read, really memorable. It's amazing how you can put into words in a way that some of us can find difficult to express or explain. You created and executed each one of your works perfectly! <3

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