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Books for teens by a teen

It's me, an 8th-grade textrovert! Just here improving my writing, because what else is there to do? ~Alice~

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Ghost Connection

I really enjoyed the book, to be honest! There were plot twists that I didn't expect and you avoided cliches well. Your grammar is a little off, and the characters' behaviors could be tweaked a bit, but with a little editing (and maybe a beta reader), you're on your way to success!

Best of luck!

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Worms

This book is very eloquently written and honestly one of the best books I've read here. There's slight grammar issues, but honestly, what book doesn't have grammar issues? I was drawn in by your work and I think you'll go places someday.

Best of luck!

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400 Days in the Apocalypse

This book has lots of potential. However, events in the story escalate too quickly for the reader to get a proper sense of suspense and concern for Josie. The grammar is fine overall, and your character is somewhat unique, as well. I just recommend you do some chapters describing everyday life in the apocalypse in a more docile way.

Best of luck!

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Fairytale Gone Bad

The plotline is a little confusing and I think that the chapters should be a little more revealing, just because if your readers get bored of not knowing what's going on, they won't read any more of your story. However, the characters are well written and the settings are easily pictured, and the author did a good job of making sure that everything was dynamic. A good story so far, I would just suggest that you make your chapters a little more explanatory of the main conflicts (why is Corinne sick? etc.)

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Illusion Forest

Other than a couple of small grammar issues, this story is really well written! I enjoyed the plot and think that it would be a great writing prompt for people who are looking to finish stories. The plotline is unique and the author is good at describing the setting of the story. All in all a good read for those in a hurry.

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Dark Poems

I have absolutely no idea how people write poetry!
This collection of poems was great and I loved the Edgar Allen Poe reference :D

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