Stella L.H.

Always on my toes!!

Okay, I've read 7 chapters by now. Let me start this by saying that I've never read, watched or done ANYTHING hockey-related, but somehow this story still makes sense and is genuinely interesting, at least for me. The writing is really good, especially the dialogue and descriptions. Also, there hasn't been a single chapter this far that felt slow or "boring". On the contrary, new things get put into light by - almost - each chapter which then keeps the reader interested at alerted at all times. So good. The back-and-forth between Theo and Tori is so soft, sweet and realistic, so anyone that likes that type of relationship, well: here you go! Can't wait to read more from you Elara! Happy reading and writing <3

I'm almost sweaty after completing the first chapter

Okay so this was only the FIRST chapter and I'm already on the edge of my seat. The hard working protagonist with a very clear goal and compelling backstory really captured me. I felt for her as soon as she was introduced. The amount of detail you put into describing her surroundings and the people she encountered really made it all seem so alive and realistic, without it being overwhelming or distracting. Key to emmerging your readers, which you did fantastically. Personally I'm usually more drawn to fantasy, sci-fi or historical stories, but this might just have changed my mind. I can't wait to see what comes next and I'm hoping you don't let your fingers rest for too long. Sending all my best wishes to you and your story!