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WOW

So I’ve been reading this for a while and I didn’t want to review it until I finished it and WOW I’m so glad I did. You have wrote each and every character so beautifully, their individual character development really shows how talented you are, especially Vlad’s character. It’s funny how I really didn’t like him and then my heart began to ache for him. The plot twist was so unexpected but it made me want to keep reading and I love that. You’re so talented and I can’t wait to start book 2. I hope you publish this one day because you deserve to have your novel on a book shelf. ALSO, I’m not even mad about Julia and Roland, I always did like him, he’s a sweetheart! But I cannot wait to see what’s in store for Vlad and Julia.

Amazing stuff, don’t ever stop writing ❤️❤️

When it happened

The overall plot is gripping and I’m wondering what happened to Ava. I noticed that chapters 3 and 4 are the same and chapters 5 and 6 are the same — I’m wondering if this is an error on my end on yours. There are a few grammar mistakes but that can easily be fixed, I think this novel will be a good read and I’m excited to read the rest!

Great work, keep it up :)

Gripping

From the very begging I was gripped. You have beautifully described the scene and have a painted a very vivid picture for the reader. The plot is unique and compelling and I cannot wait to continue reading!