Star_Dreamer

Lovely!

I liked the author's writing style- its descriptive and well balanced.

The plot is intriguing and the characters are quite realistic( though they are all fictional!)

The emotions have been captured and portrayed very well.

Nice job author!

Amazed

This story is really great! I find the plot unique and mysterious. The flow is smooth.
The characters are interesting.
Though 3 chapters are not enough to form an opinion, I feel like this story is going to get even better!
Keep up the good work author!
Good-luck!

Nice one

This story is well-written and the plot seems interesting. The flow is good and I especially liked the characters for they are intriguing with their different natures and personalities.

Some minor grammatical mistakes which are not much of a hindrance. Still, I suggest combing the chapters and editing to enhance readability and performance.

Good-luck with this story! It's really good!

Nice...

I don't really read erotic stories, but the plot of this story is really good. It's well-written and enjoyable. The various emotions and scenes are so descriptively written and everything is just amazing.

I really liked it.
Keep up the good work, author!

Loved it!

This story is lovely. It has comfiness and it has that element which makes me want to read more of it. All the characters are interesting. The scenes are aptly descriptive.

It's a very good read. Kudos to the author.

Interesting

I find the plot to be very creative and unique. This story has a lot of potential. Though, I suggest editing and polishing the chapters to enhance their performance. You have a great idea author and you seem very talented. I look forward to how this story progresses.

Good luck.