Kantana Stewart

Went kinda above my head

It started off ok but I felt more details need to be added. It feels rushed in a way. I do like the plot but the entire book just couldn't grab me. I think you did a wonderful job but I think some of the characters need more personality. Like Nolan I want to know him more lol so far he doesn't say much.

Very nice story but lots of grammer

Wonderful story but needs to be badly proofread. Alot of the story had to guess. Some words wasn't needed at all. It was like guessing though most of the story. I don't think you need so many warnings for sexual scenes. It kinda messes up the flow of the book. Maybe put it in the beginning that the book as that type of scenes in it to let the user decide before reading if they want to read this. Otherwise lovely story and worth reading if you can ignore the Grammer

You have something but so many errors

The title and story was eye catching. Werecat stories are my fav but hard to find due to most doing wolf stories. Only thing the Grammer needs to be edited. Too many run on sentences makes the story confusing. Also slow down the story is too rushed. Add more details. Example we have no idea what kind of werecat she is? Is she a tiger? A lion? What color is her fur? What color is his wolf? How big is he? The color of eyes, her hair etc. More descriptions is needed. Otherwise good story just hard to read with the current grammer.

Beautiful

Love stories that start off sad yet end up so happy. So glad he decided to be with her.

Loved

Best story I red so far on here. Just wish it was a bit longer lol wasn't ready to say goodbye.

Love the story but

Plot happened too quick.. not enough description of what was going on.