stevemthompson

No published stories yet

Overall Rating
Plot
Writing Style
Grammar Punctuation

The End

I liked the way the story ended in that it didn't end. You never knew where this story was taking you so in that sense it was suspenseful. The last part came as a total surprise as the story morphed from somewhat routine at the beginning to almost chaotic at the end of what didn't actually end.

Read the story now

No badges received yet

About Us:

Inkitt is the world’s first reader-powered book publisher, offering an online community for talented authors and book lovers. Write captivating stories, read enchanting novels, and we’ll publish the books you love the most based on crowd wisdom.