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The Light and the Dark

"This is one of the best ever. I hope to see new stories like this from you and others in the near future! Keep it up!"

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Interesting

"I like the fact that Harry and Draco get along while still in school but I’m not super hyped about Ron and Ginny being antagonist side. "

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Amazing!

"Oh goshhhhh! This was so amazing and I really enjoyed reading this, I think I may have enjoyed reading it more than the Harry Potter books! This truly is most likely the best story I have ever read and trust me, I have read a lot of books! I’ve read many fanfictions of the Harry Potter series but none have actually made an impact on me like this, I actually cried a few times, mostly at the ending of the chapters as I couldn’t stop reading it! You really are a great writer and I am glad this was the first fanfiction I read on this site, as I will probably remember it forever, Also, I am not that big of a Dramione fan yet I enjoyed this much more than the fanfictions I have read including the ships I like. It’s shown me that it doesn’t matter what you think about one little detail, it’s what you think about the whole thing. Thank you for writing this, I truly really did enjoy this, I honestly gushed so much about each part as I finished each chapter, this really will be a story to treasure and reread a thousands times, and I will never get bored of reading it."

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Light in the Dark

"Enjoyed the book. "

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Awesome

"Awesome, story."

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Amazing story

"Amazing atory. I'm an absolute HP fan and I really like the fanfictions. it's a great story. I love that Harry and Hermione are related and also that the Malfoy's are good . I personally like Dumbledore bashing a little. He is way too controlling and obsessed with Harry for my taste. So nice story and keep up the good work..."

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Light In The Dark

"I love the book and hope for a sequel or more harry potter being lord pendragon emrys/merlin hogwarts peverell and also finding the tombs of the founders while looking for merlins dark spell inside the castle as well as king arthur and merlins tombs in the castle!!!!!!!! KEEP UP THE REAT WORK!!!!!!!!! ps im also Salazar Slytherin i had to make a new account i read this before when you hadnt fully completed the story yet"

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Light In The Dark

"I would like to tell you, Stormy Lee, that I love this HP Fanfiction the most out of all of the HP Fanfictions that I've read by you the most. It would mean the world to me if you write more HP Fanfictions about Harry being the heir to all 4 of the Hogwarts Founders and also along with being not just the heir to all 4 of the Hogwarts founders but also heir to the lines of Emrys, Lefay, Peverell, and Pendragon!!!! (Emrys=Merlin's Line, Lefay=Morgana's Line, Peverell=the 3 brother's Line, and Pendragon=King Arthur's Line)!!!! I also would be very extremely happy, excited, desperate,and also grateful if you could make this HP Fanfiction "Light In The Dark" into a series as well as with your other HP Fanfiction "Hidden Island" into a series too and some of your other HP Fanfictions that don't have series' into series' with them too!!!! I would also love to see more HP Fanfiction's by you too!!!! I hope you consider what I have said. Thanks a lot!!!! Ultimate HP Freak, Garrett (.A.K.A. Salazar Slytherin)"

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raedean47

"this was great story"

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An interesting story!!

"Love that Severus and Minerva are the twins' guardian & the friendship that delevoping between Harry, Draco & other characters ! Onward to going to happen..."

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Some silly ideas

"i really like this story. It would be fun to have Uncle Tom or is it Great Uncle Tom spoiling Harry's and hermione's kids as the only Slytherin line and descendants of all the founders. hermione should also be able to speak parsel and so should their kids. So.... a protective, caring snake for each kid given on naming day? toy snake plushies? Clothes in green and silver? Extravagant promises if the hat puts them in Slytherin? Uncle Tom visiting on birthdays and Yule? baby sitting death eaters? Threats to any boyfriends? The mind boggles!"

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