What is your opinion?
Nia
"I love the plot , good novel"
Amazing work
"Love your style of writing and good efforts l could not stop reading this story."
Killer dreams
"I like this story it keeps me wanting to read more of it"
Interesting and Well Written
"Great writing, good plot, a bit chaotic and that caused my attention to drift but it is definitely a gripping story. "
Spice
"More spice please "
Good so far - lots of potential!
"I had a lot of fun reading through the beginning parts of this story. I'm not usually a fan of the werewolf genre, but this had a unique plot that kept me on my toes and made me want to keep reading! The plot and characters were the strongest parts I think. Sansa feels the most fleshed out because she's the main character, but I'm excited to see more of the others, especially Edward, Xavier, Amara, and Adam. They all feel distinct from one another and you have a lot of great story questions that keep me guessing, so great job with that! I really liked your writing style - I think you could slow things down a little at times - it still works, but that's just me. I think the only other thing I'd suggest is really going through and doing a round or two of some edits for your grammar. It's good for the most part, but just watch your capitals, and I did notice a few incomplete sentences here and there. Again, nothing editing can't fix! It's something I have to go back and keep an eye on as well. But overall, this was a great read and I had a lot of fun with it! Great job :) "
Still reading
"I’m not sure yet. "
Under the Moonlight; Alpha's Bride
"Usually, I have a well-defined idea when I write a review, but with this book; my mind is all over the place. The premise is intriguing, setup is well done as well, but then the story goes in another direction. One I understand, but didn't want to read. The two timelines (three months apart from each other) seem te contradict. In the past, he is heavily depending on the bond with her and three months later he discards and neglects her, because an old tradition, which is still unexplained (so far in the available chapters on Inkitt). The writing style is a bit chaotic. It reads like there has been some semi-editing done, for example: "I walked out of the room, perplexed, looking around. I walked downstairs and saw my mother's leg chained in the heavy chain that was impossible to break, her orange hair tangled, she was in the nightgown, and fear in my mother's eyes." This is part of a scene which reads as a flashback, turns out to be a recurring dream, but nothing like what actually happened in Xavier's past. It was difficult to follow. I would advise to adjust the text a little, like: 'Always, she was wearing the same nightgown', 'I already knew the chain was impossible to break from previous experience', 'Every time, I had to leave her like that, it breaks me more until there is nothing left.' (just some ideas) The other moment I was confused was the conversation with Felix in the dungeon. I had not realized they moved from the packhouse to the jail. Maybe add a sentence there to clarify? For now, I unlisted the book. I want to wait until the writer edited the basics (like: 'Sansa Scoffed' and the previous mentioned half edited sentences), before I start again. Feel free to contact me!"
Good!
"Good book so far. Intriguing premise. Good job "
