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Great story

"Really enjoyed this and hope there's a sequel, great story and great writing."

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The Mer King

"I enjoyed reading this story and I'm very much looking forward to the sequel 😍"

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Characters and writing need polishing, story is good

"Missing portions of narrative, spelling and the writing style ebbing in and out of first person/main character - seems a little distracting. Otherwise, the story itself is good and the story world & characters established are good too. The mer king’s character is not quite connected, too disjointed, and seems too bipolar. Doesn’t quite make sense as yet. "

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The Mer King

"Would love a back story for this book and also maybe a sequel???"

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A story that’ll keep you wanting more!

"The Merking from the start has me enticed with its descriptive language and characters that make you feel like you’re experiencing everything right there with them. Each chapter has such a suspense gripping ending that’ll have you keep wanting to read more! I’m currently still reading as I got, but let me assure you, you’re in for a treat! "

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The Mer King

"Very different than what I expected but a pleasure so far. Looking forward to the rest of the book."

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Amazing all over the place!

"Technical writing skills: perfect! After 15 chapters, I still haven't spot a typo... My guess is Winters is a perfectionist. Pace, plot, setting; All is well thought out. It truly is something I never read before and I'm glad it is uploaded here. Thank you so much!"

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Wow

"Never expected this great writing and a lot of twists like the real little jeremiad lol. Now I want to know more please continue!"

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The Mer King

"This book is quite something. Shove the generally accepted mermaid things you know out of the window and let yourself be blown away and amazed. Thanks for such a good beginning! Can't wait for more!"

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The Mer King

"Extraordinary work! The author has taken a familar tale of a mermaid who wants to be human and turned it upside down, into a story of a human turned mermaid. Plus a male lead that you want to hate, but I fear he is only misunderstood. Page turning goodness! "

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The Mer King

"I choose to rate this story because , of it's amazing story line it is very impressive and makes the readers curious about what's is going to happen next."

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This story is magical

"I love the nautical feel and the fact that this isn’t your typical merfolk story. It’s intriguing and I’m happy to see every update! I literally cannot get enough of this superb world."

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The Mer King

"Amazing story so far I am absolutely hooked!! Can’t wait for me the descriptions are so good I feel like I’m right there with them and holding my breath 😂"

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The Mer King

"Haven’t made up my mind yet. The Mer King seems like a psycho and her guards seem to care for her more than he does and any ruler who in his own arrogance kills his subjects for questioning him is no ruler. Especially not by boiling him alive in front of the girl you just converted against her will! What an asshat! It doesn’t matter how handsome he is!"

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