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What is your opinion?
Devil's Advocate
"It's a cool book so far and recommendable. A must read book I must say."
Needs Editing
"I love the interesting plot and how the story dives right into the action/drama. Also, the setting reminds me of "The Untamed" and "Word of Honor". However, the chapters need some heavy rereading and editing. Also, I would love the inclusion of more character senses in the description: smell, touch, taste, etc. There are many time skips or perspective changes that need to be clarified. You have a solid start so keep at it! Hope to see some improvements soon! :)"
