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Desert Commander

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Summary

Oman married a homeless girl to protect her from this cruel society. He was beyond frustrated by this girl who was thrust into his hands against his will. Later, unknowingly he fell harder for his wife. *** Oman was exiled from his own country and he had travel to another country. During their deserted journey they both came close enough to share physical and emotional intimacy. Oman was a ruthless and fearless man, while tara was a quiet and innocent girl.

Status
5mo ago
Chapters
53
Rating
4.7 (19 reviews)
Age Rating
18+

Prologue

i am not a professional writer. I write for fun. Enjoy it as much as i am having fun while writing it.

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"I can't marry her. I am old enough to be her father, not her bloody husband" he shouted in pure rage.

"oman you have to marry her. We can't leave her like that. Think about it. She has no one. Men will eye rape her and think they has a right to mollest her" He looked at the girl who was clutching Fatima's neck tightly.

Indeed, it was true. Her beauty Always attract so much attention. They can't leave a poor soul like this on streets.

He sat down on a bench rubbing his palm against his forehead. He was in strange dilema.

"Call priest we will marry right away" he stated firmly.

Fatima gave him a sympathetic smile.

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Oman married a 16 year old girl to save her from this cruel society. But later he fell harder for his little wife. But his life was also in danger as he was exiled from his country. Sultan of Iran wanted him to be dead. He was planning to go towards Indian subcontinent and spend rest of his life there.

During their travel they faced many problems but got comfortable enough to share physical and emotional intimacy.

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