So imaginative

"I can't tell if this is satire or serious, but whatever it is, the author has a lot of imagination. If it's satire, and the author's aim is to shock readers with the plot, then they did their job right. There are a lot of things happening in the book. Random stuff. Fantastic stuff. I just kept reading for the sheer entertainment of it all. I just wanted to see what the author will keep coming up with. And the weird randomness was... weird. Yet strangely entertaining. If this wasn't satire but supposed to be serious, then I think the writer will get better with more practice. I won't dwell much on things like plot, dialogue, and the description. It needs a lot of work and I'm sure it will get better the more the author practices. But the one thing I couldn't stand was the protagonist himself, Obu. I know the author meant well and wanted Obu to be a hero type with good intentions. But he seems like a bully and doesn't think through his actions. He doesn't care about consequences for his actions. Clearly, he's a powerful dude and he knows it. Yet he still uses his incredible power without thinking about how it can destroy things around him. I also didn't like how he kept invading people's homes and demanding for things that wasn't his, and then killed the people when they refused to hand them over. That's messed up. This story struck me as an anime-type plot. I love anime. The problem, however, was that the plot needs better structure. All in all, the mere fact that the author even wrote a book at all is impressive. Writing isn't easy, let alone writing a whole book. I hope the author never gives up on writing and keep practicing. They have a lot of imagination which is great for storytelling. "