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Great Job!

"Fast paced, short + concise description, and engaging from start to finish. Fits the 13+ rating with the horror factor. The second chapter was a nice addition with a wholesome ending. However, some of the dialogue can be awkward. Really great job!"

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Frankie Wangadoodle,s Funhouse

"The author shows great imagination and has a keen writing style that is both entertaining and easy to follow the storyline. The cover is in direct line with the story and cleverly done."

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