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Liked the story

"I loved the beginning of the story and middle just not the ending I didn’t like the way it ended."

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His mafia baby

"Best story ever😉😉😁😁#badass mafias for life"

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Great characters

"Like the story line sucks you in , found the bitch language a bit too far and unneeded at points, some grammar and he/she descriptions are muddled at points as-well, but overall like it ."

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His mafia baby

"I love the plot and the dialogue but l feel it's going very fast . I think they swear a lot otherwise it's great writing a little grammar here and there but l would recommend it to anybody who loves reading "

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