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Lauralie

"Love it! Can't wait to read the rest. It's insane,sexy,dark and twisted and so loving and passionate. Awesome"

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Love it!

"This is getting really good!! I can't wait to see what's next"

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LAURALIE

"Great story, but it has not been updated in 2 months, so don't waste your time!"

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Romance novel

"Good story line. Curious to see where all this goes. "

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Goodg boook

"Very good writing and story keeps you wanting more. I really like stories with suspence love and a twist.I hope it keeps going this way"

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Yes

"Yes yes … come on write more!!!!! "

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Sucked in

"Love reading having the main female character being a badass when the situation is necessary. It makes (for me anyway) the story so much more exciting to read. Thank you. Cannot wait for the updates❤️❤️"

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Great Read

" A story where you will become invested in the characters. The storyline has me wondering what is Laurelie hiding? Looking forward to the updates. Great job 👏 "

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Amazing

"Great storyline. More"

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Laurie

"Some of the words are spelled wrong but I like the story so far"

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Interesting

"pls post the next chapter "

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Interesting

"I like that the girl isn't blind to mafia things. She's a good female lead. Her being a surgeon is different. And it's definitely steamy. Keep up the work. "

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Hot

"Very steamy and sexy book for sure! While I feel this story is a little cliche, I appreciated seeing that the main character (Lauralie) is a strong female character. That is something different from the other Mafia stories that I've read. I understand that the story is continuing, however, I would like to see more emphasis on the character's backstories, to see how they came to be. I also just noticed that you have fixed a lot of your grammar and wording in sentences, so kudos to you for doing that! The description has also improved and I thought it was easy to read. I had noticed a few grammar and wording errors, however, that's normal and they don't draw away from the story. Overall it's a great book, with very interesting characters, and I can't wait to read what comes next! "

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Laurealie

"I do not like the last two chapters. It was too much, forced. And I do not know how I feel about the idea that she will be after Sal too. I figured out that Sal likes her but threesome will not be sth what Michele would agree, he is the Don of the mafia and beeing at least a little bit realistic Don of the mafia and threesome ? No way..."

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Loved it

"Hot and Steamy"

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