What is your opinion?
Love it
"I love the novel can't wait for the rest of the novel is done could not put it down kept reading until the last chapter "
MORE PLEASE!
"I love this premise. It's unique and so often neglected. I have a daughter with CP. I know the challenges they face and the huge range of various affects of the injury. "
Great novel
"I battle to go to the next page, always a delay, despite pressing multiple times on the tab. The book is great, good writing skill. Different plot, not the usual, quite refreshing. "
Nice
"Nice love it please consider continuing the book would love to read more of it "
Rescue His Baby Girl
"I do not like her evil twin and how much he is torturing her, she already went through enough torture, and I hope her Daddy rescues her really soon "
His baby girl
"I absolutely live this book I wish I had a dpm like Victor."
Margaret
"Love your book so far hope there is an update soon 😀 "
My baby girl’s disability
"I really like this book and can’t wait to read more of this story. The dynamic and storyline is soo good. "
Love this story
"This is one of my favorite little stories. I have a painful disability and everything you describe the staring, the whispering it is so accurate. I have never found a ddlg with a disabled little and it warms my heart to read it. Your plot is suspenseful and I am never sure what is going to happen next. "
How do i rate this novel, the novel is interisting and got me want to read more its 5 stars, the plot of the novel its a very good plot and i want to know more it got a 5 the sytle of the aurhor she got 5 becsuse her grammer is great, her skills , punctuation is outstanding, her skills are explainable.i would have my family, friends to read this book, i want to buy this book this book have u want to read more just BBB to see how it ends
"OMG! This is the best novel I ever read. The author’s writing style is incredible. I can’t stop reading it. I never heard of DDLG relationships until I started reading this book. I love the storyline between Rosetta & Victor. Their chemistry is so amazing. I don’t like to see people with disabilities getting bullied; I think it’s wrong. 💛🧡🤍🤎💜💙💚🖤❤️Love is Love ❤️ 💛🧡🤍🤎💜💙💚🖤I recommend this book to people who wants to read a unique story. "
My Baby Girl's Disability DDLG Love Story
"I think that it needs a bit more editing. A couple of places were repetitious. The story is totally Amazing! 🤩 Please keep writing! I'm disappointed that this survey is covering up the last paragraph of this chapter!! He reaches in his suit and WHAT!?? I sooo want to know!!!?"
Mixed Feelings
"I have a few hesitations with this story on the plot side. While I understand and greatly admire you wanting to tell a story where the FL is a woman with a disability and she falls in love and has a highly sexual relationship with a man (which people with disabilities aren't often depicted as sexually desirable, so fuck yeah we love representation) I fear this may be on the line of fetishizing. It was hard for me to read since it seems the main seduction of this character is that she has severe trauma and a disability rather than those being other parts of her but not the main reason we are to think she is attractive to our ML. It just feels sort of icky to sexualize childhood abuse and trauma as well as a disability... Especially since fetishizing disabilities is a huge problem in the porn world as well as dark web and human trafficking. Furthermore, the auction aspect in and of itself sounds like human trafficking... Potentially these women are voluntarily being sold (which is prostitution then, but I have no moral issues with that and don't thing it should be illegal, but still selling women to men to possess and own feels like sex slavery which is not good), but idk it's definitely walking a line. So, ultimately, with the plot, it doesn't sit well and I'm not sure if it's sending the message you want to be. I think it's almost objectifying in a way, and while I'm not someone with a disability I was sexually abused when I was a child and engage in BDSM because it is empowering and does help in a way (which is super common as you said) but I think there's a difference between depicting the use of these activities to cope with trauma vs. sexualizing trauma. I think this walks the line between that. As far as the story goes, the first 5 chapters are all various intros that could be consolidated into one because a reader will likely stop reading after the third one. Also, the character descriptions in the second chap are unnecessary, we'll learn this about them when we read the book so you don't need to list it (showing vs. telling) I think the characters are interesting, but they certainly follow a lot of stereotypes. I mean, half of the character's parents are dead or not in the picture. And when they are dead, it was tragic deaths and extremely horrific backstories of their lives, which just doesn't feel realistic necessarily. I think you'd have a much more compelling story if there was a bit more subtly or nuance to the characters lives. Overall, the writing style is good there were a good amount of punctuation and grammatical errors, and I find that you tend to tell instead of show. So, in conclusion, I think the idea in and of itself can be very powerful and unlike other stories, but it may be worthwhile to evaluate whether or not you're crossing certain lines in order to make sure you're sending the message you want to send. Obviously, that's up to you. Kudos and keep up the good work!"
