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Fucking Siblings

"Well written but was disappointed that it ended there. I was waiting for him to let her know that he was actually there, watching her like she had watched him. Wanted to see how she reacted to it."

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Hot Start, But Needs More Substance

"This story brings the heat right away with taboo step-sibling tension that’s sure to grab attention. The chemistry is there, and the descriptions are vivid, but it leans a bit too much on shock value without giving us enough character depth or emotional stakes. With stronger dialogue and a bit more backstory for Katie and Jason, it could go from spicy to genuinely compelling. Right now, it feels more like a teaser than a full story."

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Fucking step siblings

"The book so far is ok, BUT I dont like the fact that y'all can't wait until the end (Or I get it) at least the last chapter at least before you quiz me"

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Stepbrother

"Good scene "

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