By Terri

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Very well done!

Just a suggestion to help with the grammar errors is to try and write your stories in word and using the spelling/grammar feature before posting. Otherwise, the story was great! Keep up the good work!

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Needs some work

Except for the lack of punctuation and not always being clear on who was speaking, I was enjoying the story. Still unclear as to what actually happened to his father? If his mother was a true mate and the mate legend is true, why is she still alive? So are B&E safe now? Every other story I've read, says the mating bond is not actually complete until they actually mate. Are you trying to keep it PG?

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Awesome!

Thoroughly enjoyed your story. Your brought forth some characters that I have not found in other stories (ie: the Dire Wolves, the fire fox, etc) Found a few spelling errors but managed to figure out what you were trying to say. Was shocked to see your one notation of 5000 words when I thought we were limited to 1500! How did you manage that? Looking forward to reading your future works. Hope you will give mine a shot! Very different than what you have here but hopefully you will enjoy them!

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Awesome!

Grammar still needs work and I got a bit confused as to what was going on and who was saying what but over all it's very good! I've always been a sucker for a happy ending!

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Loved it!

Grammar still needs help but loved the story! Can't wait to read the next edition.

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Good one!

This is the best of the three I've read so far! Grammar still needs a bit of help but otherwise you are filling in the blanks from the other two stories! Good job!

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Becoming clearer

Not sure why you chose to break this into a series of books but I'm enjoying reading them. Some spelling errors need to be fixed. You have "warped" or "warping" when it should be wrapped or wrapping. There are a couple more that I spotted when I was reading it but can't remember exactly what they were off the top of my head.

Glad to see the next in the series is ready to go and will continue to read because I have to admit I'm hooked and want to know the stories behind all of the characters and why they are the way they are.

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Good story

Needs more background information on the characters like what actually happened to Leon to make his pack turn on him? Did he kill someone? Who? Why? If not, who framed him? Why?

What happened to Ash's father to make him like he is? The end is kind of confusing as well. Grammar definitely needs some work but otherwise it's a good story. Look forward to reading the rest of the series.

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Oh please hurry and finish it!

I was really enjoying your story and was very disappointed that it is not finished. Some of the English needs help but otherwise it's very entertaining.

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Great story

Thoroughly enjoyed your story. Looking forward to reading the sequel.

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Awesome read!

Enjoyed your story immensely. Great ending! Keep up the good work!

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Blood Moon

I'm really enjoying your story even with all the grammatical errors (sorry, but I was a secretary for many years so proof reading is a habit). I thought this was a finished work and wondering when the next/final chapters will be available?

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